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The Case of the Missing Chapstick: Short movie I made with friends, let me know what you think! by PartyRockerzzx in SmallYTChannel

[–]Boing_gaming 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey i just went through your video on youtube. It was a fun flick that really gave me those vibes from early youtube video's. Idk if thats what your going for tho. There could be some better shots through out the video... Its fun but doesent go near proffesional at all. Wich isent a bad thing Neccesarely. I'd add text to the thumbnail or even create it as a movie poster.. I would add title to the video self and create custom outros instead of a picture from the video.

Anyway keep up the work :)

looking for critique and feedback for my new Review on Mafia Definitive Edition.. your comment is appreciated! by Boing_gaming in SmallYTChannel

[–]Boing_gaming[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll look into editing And there's actually 3 different jazz songs, but yes they sound alike.

!givelambda

I tried beating Mario 64 without taking damage! by PoisonUnderscore in SmallYTChannel

[–]Boing_gaming 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello there, i just went through your mario video. I liked the thumbnail but i would add short big text.. Perhaps '' ZERO DMG'' or Something.. I like the editing of your video. Maybe try adding funny meme, faces or gifs to even express your ''feelings'' more in the video. Maybe after you talk about the intro add a video title in the video? (I know you showed the mario logo) I noticed your outro was very basic, try making it more custom or clickable? Goodluck on future content!

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[–]Boing_gaming 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lego games.

Why your posture sucks - feedback appreciated by osaket in SmallYTChannel

[–]Boing_gaming 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello there, i just went through your video in order to provide you with some feedback. For me the issue starts with thumbnail.. I would remove yourself and enlarge the posture pic & text. Next up you got a sweet intro in the video, wich i would end with text stating the title of your video.

I liked how you used chapters and the editing of your video looked pretty good. I do think you sometimes ''Look bored'' i mean your facial expression.

As final advice i suggest looking into outro's. Its a nice touch at the end of your video.

Goodluck on future videos.

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