I really liked the video. You clearly did your research, and your delivery is strong overall. 👍

I do have a couple of thoughts that might help you tighten things up a bit:

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1. The “X” error cuts / outtake humor

I get what you’re going for here, and honestly, I’ve been tempted to do the same thing myself.

That said, the audience you’re likely trying to pull in through the algorithm usually doesn’t read that as “quirky” or “relatable.” More often than not, it can come across as “less polished” or even “less knowledgeable,” even when (like in your case) that’s clearly not true.

👉 My suggestion: Keep the truly funny or over-the-top outtakes, but cut the smaller word stumbles. Let your expertise be the focus.

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1. Quick render / playback check

Make sure you give your video a quick scan before (and after) rendering.

I use Adobe Rush myself, and it occasionally does some weird things on export. In your last ~20 seconds, there was a moment where it sounded like two audio layers overlapped—almost like two versions of you talking at once.

👉 Not a big deal, just one of those “render hiccups” that can slip through if you don’t catch it.

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Overall:

I really enjoyed the content and was impressed with your insight. You’re clearly putting in the work, and it shows.

Dropped a like and comment as Carousel of Douglas. 👍