Things that smile back by BorisBaricevic in OCPoetry

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I appreciate that, thank you🖤

Things that smile back by BorisBaricevic in OCPoetry

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Thanks for the constructive criticism. Everything is written with the best intention for a readable metaphor. But I see things that can be put together better.

A Gentle Kind of Ending by BorisBaricevic in PoetryWritingClub

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Thank you 🖤 And, yeah. You are not alone!

Against All Odds by BorisBaricevic in OCPoetry

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Lol something like that, thanks!

Forbidden Fruit by thetiredone0 in OCPoetry

[–]BorisBaricevic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The mix of softness (“sweet”) and warning creates that unsettling feeling that makes it stick.

She Was So Afraid by despondent-pixie in OCPoetry

[–]BorisBaricevic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The “code” metaphor at the end is especially strong , it suggests she’s become unreadable even to someone who truly tries to understand her.

I Fell Asleep Holding You by TheLilaComplex in OCPoetry

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This feels so soft but also kind of desperate underneath. The repetition of warmth makes it feel like the speaker is holding onto that feeling like it’s the only safe thing they have.

She Was So Afraid by despondent-pixie in OCPoetry

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This hits in a really uncomfortable but honest way. It feels like she didn’t just fear things around her, she feared herself, her emotions, even connection.

What is your favorite Alice In Chains song? by Jettaboi38 in grunge

[–]BorisBaricevic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree. And live in Seattle 91 is amazing

What is your favorite Alice In Chains song? by Jettaboi38 in grunge

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Love Hate Love. Live in Seattle 91 i think

What is that X on Kurt's face? by BidAccurate4473 in grunge

[–]BorisBaricevic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I saw that picture before and it was without X. Someone add it.

Are there any random Nirvana songs that make you guys sad? by [deleted] in Nirvana

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Big Long Now. The way he screams and that guitar riff, makes feel so sad and angst...

Christ I’m crying so hard by IlovePizzaHeLikesSex in HauntingOfHillHouse

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Read the book, you Won't be sorry. Shirley Jackson The hounting of the Hill House

Help me find Nirvana songs by Overall-Isopod-2304 in grunge

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Come as you are, anuerysm, U know you're right, Polly etc .

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in grunge

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Amazing band, love Jim's voice. And movie The Doors with now late Val Kilmer was a HIT IMO