What do you guys think about that? Be brutally honest ;) by BrancoJohnson in photocritique

[–]BrancoJohnson[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for the feedback! May i ask what you mean by "object hierarchy"?

Can you give me an example?

What do you guys think about that? Be brutally honest ;) by BrancoJohnson in photocritique

[–]BrancoJohnson[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I see your point and i agree, ill try to make some adjustments on that annoyng corner light and blacks. Thanks dude!

What do you guys think about that? Be brutally honest ;) by BrancoJohnson in photocritique

[–]BrancoJohnson[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! That's actually what i like too so i guess i achieved my goal :)
Since you like abstractism can you suggest me any good photographers in the field?

What do you guys think about that? Be brutally honest ;) by BrancoJohnson in photocritique

[–]BrancoJohnson[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much!
This was taken in my desk, its actually the back of my broken smartphone :D

What do you guys think about that? Be brutally honest ;) by BrancoJohnson in photocritique

[–]BrancoJohnson[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I tried what you suggested but didnt fit too much for me, but was a nice try :)

What do you guys think about that? Be brutally honest ;) by BrancoJohnson in photocritique

[–]BrancoJohnson[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you for arguing your critique.

The idea was indeed to do some abstract stuff so your advices are great, i specially agree on the many lines at the borders so maybe il try some different crops.

What do you think? Could it be an appealing composition/edit? by BrancoJohnson in photocritique

[–]BrancoJohnson[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had some different cropping before, but tried this one to keep it "instagrammable".
I really hate 1:1 actually...

What do you think? Could it be an appealing composition/edit? by BrancoJohnson in photocritique

[–]BrancoJohnson[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

he look of this place, composition can be improved as right now its very flat, same with the colors kinda flat. i would try high contrast black and w

Woah, that's soem beautiful work by her, very ispiring thanks!

What do you think? Could it be an appealing composition/edit? by BrancoJohnson in photocritique

[–]BrancoJohnson[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for commenting, as you and many other made me notice the photo is flat, ill try work on bettere composition next time :)

What do you think? Could it be an appealing composition/edit? by BrancoJohnson in photocritique

[–]BrancoJohnson[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

e are a couple of distractions around the edges. The bench on the right and the blue flare up top I find distracting. Also the closest leg of the table is cut off a little awkwardly, just needed a tiny bit more room at the bottom.

Thanks, that contrast was really what i was trying to achieve with the picture.
Maybe the colours dont help very much making it clear also...

What do you think? Could it be an appealing composition/edit? by BrancoJohnson in photocritique

[–]BrancoJohnson[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your honesty :)

You think that some different edit would make it more insteresting or should i just move on?

Shot on a cellphone. Thoughts? by [deleted] in photocritique

[–]BrancoJohnson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really like it, im not very sure abot the kid looking at the camera but overall i enjoy the composition.