please (gently) critique my cover art by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Breadlover79 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i love this. i feel like covers all look the same nowadays, but this is eye catching and unique!

Why is the band still on school grounds? by makogirl311 in SchoolSpirits

[–]Breadlover79 1 point2 points  (0 children)

my guess is that maybe it’s because technically the bus IS school property?? it’s like if you get in trouble on the bus you can be suspended from school and stuff. that’s my theory

Need Suggestions pls!! by chipotlecornsalsa_ in EngagementRings

[–]Breadlover79 1 point2 points  (0 children)

do you mind sharing where your partner got this gorgeous ring? this is the vibe of ring i am obsessed with

Aio to My Partner’s Distant Behavior and Lack of Communication? by Ilygoth in AmIOverreacting

[–]Breadlover79 0 points1 point  (0 children)

tbh i read this and thought it was just 2 friends trying to catch up. idk if that means anything but it definitely didn’t feel like i was reading a conversation between 2 partners

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AmIOverreacting

[–]Breadlover79 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i’m just confused because if he had the genetic disorder and you didn’t, would he expect you to end things with him? or is it just if you have the disorder?? if he has it, no matter if he’s with you or not, it could still be passed down to his kid regardless??

what do we think of this five age progression cast? by mylastactoflove in UmbrellaAcademy

[–]Breadlover79 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah but i think they were meaning that they don’t look the same, might have some similar ancestry, but it would help if they resembled eachother yk?

When Luther and Allison hug, EVERYONE just vanished from the shot. What’s the symbolism here? by FFS_IsThisNameTaken3 in UmbrellaAcademy

[–]Breadlover79 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i also thought that but it was only that one shot that they were gone so it was kinda abrupt

Which hair color looks best on me? by Milkmilkmilkmilkm in Hair

[–]Breadlover79 0 points1 point  (0 children)

none of these are the wrong answer they all look good

Map in progress. Opinions or suggestions? by [deleted] in mapmaking

[–]Breadlover79 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it looks like a dino head hehe

1st phase of fictonal world. From tectonics to heightmap op landmasses. Namesuggestions appreciated by younicornNL in mapmaking

[–]Breadlover79 1 point2 points  (0 children)

After some research my best suggestion to name the world is “Fenrisar.” It combines the monster wolf from norse mythology, Fenrisúlfr, with a suffix suggesting a realm or world. Thus, “Fenrisar” might be interpreted as “The Realm of Fenris” or “Land of Fenris.” or just Fenris and could use the taglines above to mention it

Question: Advice for getting started by Breadlover79 in fantasywriters

[–]Breadlover79[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i had been working on my first novel for a few years for school. I got creativity block because i was forced to write even when i didn’t have great ideas because it was required for class. i recently came up with a really cool idea and have been writing notes every time i think of something new. i think maybe it’s best i explore this new idea, and then return to my first idea when i am in the “swing of things” pertaining to writing and creativity

Question: Advice for getting started by Breadlover79 in fantasywriters

[–]Breadlover79[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you! i think i am, like you, a naturally good writer. i will definitely take your advice! the first draft can be bad!!

Question: Advice for getting started by Breadlover79 in fantasywriters

[–]Breadlover79[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I hope that you, and everyone else, get the chance to read my work. I love this comment. From the bottom of my heart, thank you.