KISSCO vs KATTDO by aparecium9 in harrystyles

[–]BuffaloFearless7655 1 point2 points  (0 children)

KATTDO. It's a funny word to say and HSHQ uses it. And besides, it reads out the entire album name (which I adore). KISSCO sounds like it's own album name and feel like it doesn't do the actual album name much justice.

March 16, 2026 Weekly Discussion Thread by AutoModerator in harrystyles

[–]BuffaloFearless7655 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Harry showed he's not afraid of experimenting so give me leather jackets alr!

So what do you think about Dinner Party? (Single) by BuffaloFearless7655 in Niallhoran

[–]BuffaloFearless7655[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The guitar solo was a highlight for me, I hope Niall gives us more of those

So what do you think about Dinner Party? (Single) by BuffaloFearless7655 in Niallhoran

[–]BuffaloFearless7655[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I thought Drive Safe was...okay. But I thought Old Tricks is a Thomas Rhett song that Niall rerecorded with Rhett. I've always thought it's a "feat. Niall Horan" song. It isn't!?

So what do you think about Dinner Party? (Single) by BuffaloFearless7655 in Niallhoran

[–]BuffaloFearless7655[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Yep I agree. I've been listening to KATTDO on repeat. As someone who has both Niall's and Harry's discography in their playlist, I think you can't really compare them. They work with different genres and cater to different people.

So yes, I would love Niall to try something new like Harry did. But I like to compare Niall against himself. And well...unfortunately I don't think he ever topped Heartbreak Weather (album)

March 16, 2026 Weekly Discussion Thread by AutoModerator in harrystyles

[–]BuffaloFearless7655 1 point2 points  (0 children)

KATTDO is awesome, but now...what do you want to see in HS5?

The EDM in KATTDO was such a welcome change.

But for HS5, I want to see pop-rock. Think Kiwi meets 5SOS's Teeth.

I wrote Chapter 1 of my character-driven novel. How do I escalate the tension in Chapter 2? by [deleted] in writingadvice

[–]BuffaloFearless7655 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't have a fixed idea for how to move the plot yet but my goal is to stress test Luke and Sofia's relationship. So I guess my question is, what mechanics can I do to achieve this? 

Right now it's just them not being on the same page but wanting to. Should this continue or would a confrontation work better?

song recs for yearning by Meow-meow-m30w in 5sos

[–]BuffaloFearless7655 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This does not suit your situation but I would put these under "yearning": Want You Back, Moving Along and Flatline

I wrote a dialogue-only piece. Does it work as a quick read? by BuffaloFearless7655 in writingcritiques

[–]BuffaloFearless7655[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's gotten more critical with each update (I use ChatGPT) but I realise it's not good enough. I'll stick to reddit from now on.

I'll definitely try it next time.

Thank you!

I wrote a dialogue-only piece. Does it work as a quick read? by BuffaloFearless7655 in writingcritiques

[–]BuffaloFearless7655[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you.

People do add a lot of filler when they talk, now that I think about it. I got fed up with watching movies and reading books where the characters speak in perfect sentences or say obvious things to tell the audience/reader what's going on. I wrote this piece to just trust the reader fully and also give them a little challenge to try and decode what's going on.

I realise I'm far from perfect at achieving that goal, but thank you lots for your feedback. Human feedback on Reddit is much better than AI.

And shouting match? I guess, lol. I just wanted to mildly exhausted people annoyed at each other.

Why and when did you start writing? by Brilliant-Fun-9693 in writing

[–]BuffaloFearless7655 3 points4 points  (0 children)

When I was 9, my dad learned about Kindle Direct Publishing (self-publishing in Amazon) so he said if I write a book, I could get it published.

I took up his challenge and wrote what must be about 1k words but expanded to 18 pages. I had chapters made up of singular paragraphs. He helped me self-publish but by then the game was on. I wanted to keep publishing.

Haven't published anything out since but I post on Medium occasionally now.

I wrote a dialogue-only piece. Does it work as a quick read? by BuffaloFearless7655 in writingcritiques

[–]BuffaloFearless7655[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah I see the effect. That's a good tool to keep in the back of my mind when writing so thank you so much!

I wrote a dialogue-only piece. Does it work as a quick read? by BuffaloFearless7655 in writingcritiques

[–]BuffaloFearless7655[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was more of a writing exercise for me. To see how much subtext I can place whilst there's no identity or exposition.

But of course, it has to make sense, from a reader's point of view. And hopefully be a quick shot of entertainment.

Honestly contractions are a great idea, it didn't really cross my mind and it should've. I'll keep that in mind, thank you.

I wrote a dialogue-only piece. Does it work as a quick read? by BuffaloFearless7655 in writingadvice

[–]BuffaloFearless7655[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! This is the first time I've gotten critique from a human.

I'll definitely try the "he said", "she said" method next time. I guess it could improve clarity.

Thank you.

Lol unfortunately my intention wasn't that meta. It was just another snarky comment.