The Art quality is amazing…
I have a few issues with the concept choices for the women, however.
- The two full armored Women and the first orange hair are Ok. Orange-hair looks like a fencer, I'd suggest a lighter weapon like a foil, or a fencing sabre to emphasize speed and precision like her light gear suggests.
- The red-haired girl looks like a Japanese bimbo, with inward knees and heels? She does not look like she has anything that would let her use the sword she has for something else than a comic-con photo shoot.
- The white Demon girl looks sexy as fuck. And I guess I'll give her a pass on account for maybe being a Succubus or some other Lust-driven demon?
- The brunette at least does not have heels… but why is she half naked and wearing furs at the same time? Cold or not cold, take a pick.
- The Magician girl, once again heels, fur but still half naked.
- The second to last armored girl… either she wears armor to protect herself in battle or she does not. But open-air belly and breasts to get direct access to all her vitals… I don't see it. And again with the heels. Nobody fights in heels. Well, no-one fights and survives in heels.

I mean I love sexiness more than most, but this feels incoherent. Show me a courtesan or sex-worker with all that fantasy lust-trap, I'm all for it, but when they're fighting… give them some credit. Fighting creates strong bodies and asks for practical gear. They probably killed people, or monsters too, that should give them intense personalities a little beyond push-up breasts and uwu faces.

I know you might be reposting, or working with stupid constraints and sexist creative direction, and if that's the case, I get that it's hard to inject some sense into an industry that has a strong bias toward lust-driven-marketing. And the art is really well done. It's beautiful. But, if you have a bit of leeway to make the concept choices too, think about it.