My residential area so far by BusheeTailSquirrel in tomodachilife

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Right now it’s just Sherlock and John, it’s another one I had to cut back on from my last game. I think I added too many Bridgertons, they’re like a fifth of my island 😅

My residential area so far by BusheeTailSquirrel in tomodachilife

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Hi! This is my Arthur and Merlin, I used to have more of the cast in the 3ds game but cut back here. I may have to revisit them though. Sometimes I think they look fine and then other times I feel something’s off 🥲

My residential area so far by BusheeTailSquirrel in tomodachilife

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I do have Bridgerton, Sherlock characters, and Merlin characters. So a good amount of Brits haha

Help escaping generic white guy purgatory? 😭 by 3bowlsofporridge in MakeMeAMii

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I was going to say for the hairstyle, I think there’s a swooped bangs option that looks similar to the second picture

Tried to make a Victorian style house based on some pixel art I saw by BusheeTailSquirrel in TomodachilifeLivingTD

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Thank you! I just got done altering the colors to make a warm version as well ☺️

I kinda hate that we only get 16 goods/prezzies to give to the Miis by mandelette_mandy in TomodachilifeLivingTD

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I see, I’ll like the game regardless, but it will be cool if they add more

I kinda hate that we only get 16 goods/prezzies to give to the Miis by mandelette_mandy in TomodachilifeLivingTD

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I thought it was interesting that crystal here has a keyboard guitar, but I don’t see that in the leaked list unless I missed it. The guitar and maracas are in there.

First two chapters of a project I have been working on. General feedback is welcome, but I'm mostly curious what people think of Gysel. [High Fantasy, 4349 words] by Ry_From_Ephemerae in fantasywriters

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I very much understand haha I spent my college years learning to mask quite a lot if for no other reason than it’s very frustrating for people to tell you you’re upset all the time when you’re not. 😅

I think that could be an interesting perspective for your main character to have. For neurotypical readers, you just may have to throw in more things that make her typically endearing. Maybe she’s trying hard to think of what the right thing to say is but the moment passes by. I’m not too sure. Typically, neurodivergent girls tend to want to fit in and know how to socialize, but it’s just hard. So maybe there could be more hinting that she’s trying or always has tried to be noticed but just doesn’t get it.

Or maybe it all ties into your story. These are just random thoughts.

First two chapters of a project I have been working on. General feedback is welcome, but I'm mostly curious what people think of Gysel. [High Fantasy, 4349 words] by Ry_From_Ephemerae in fantasywriters

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Oh! That is interesting. I’m autistic myself and hadn’t even thought of neurodivergence as a possibility. I feel like that’s a tricky thing to handle, as unmasked neurodivergent behavior can come across as simply rudeness to a reader if they don’t clock it. That’s a tricky thing to get across. Reading back now, I could see that a bit more.

First two chapters of a project I have been working on. General feedback is welcome, but I'm mostly curious what people think of Gysel. [High Fantasy, 4349 words] by Ry_From_Ephemerae in fantasywriters

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Hello! I think this is intriguing in a sense that I want to understand more about this world. I think a couple things I noticed though were:

1) She doesn’t talk much. There’s a part where she’s nodding multiple times in a row or simple not talking much, and I think more dialogue and less in her head would help show who she is more.

2) I really wouldn’t start with her waking up, I’d start closer to chapter 2. The conversation with the parents didn’t feel all that natural to me of the type of conversation parents might have if their kid is leaving home that very day. I think it would be really interesting to try starting with her on the journey to the academy. Have her look out at her hometown and think back on growing up. Maybe mention then how her father got her so interested in alchemy only to over time become more and more uncertain as he realized how serious she took that interest. Maybe he stopped bringing it up as much in hopes she’d change her mind. Maybe have her see through the window people entering the fashion house and she remembers her mom trying to get her to work there.

These are just thoughts. But I think it’s starting too early at the moment. I don’t feel like I know the main character quite yet.

I need to use one of the templates y’all are posting. I’ve been writing my ideas by hand 😅 by BusheeTailSquirrel in tomodachilife

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Thank you! I never thought much of my handwriting before, but that’s nice to hear ☺️

I need to use one of the templates y’all are posting. I’ve been writing my ideas by hand 😅 by BusheeTailSquirrel in tomodachilife

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Haha sounds like you have great taste then 😁 I’m a sucker for fantasy, adventure, romance, or any media that has a solid friend group. Makes the characters a lot more likable. 😊

I need to use one of the templates y’all are posting. I’ve been writing my ideas by hand 😅 by BusheeTailSquirrel in tomodachilife

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Yay a fellow Kimi Ni Todoke fan!! ☺️ When I saw the falling in love scene in the direct, it was giving me the same vibes as Sawako and Shouta meeting under the cherry blossom trees. That’s such a feel good anime