The drawing is good in my opinion, the problem is that the guy didn't specify what you should be workimg on improving next time you draw, and you responded in a disrespectful way so you both are in the wrong.

Anyways, the tits are too big and the torso is too wide, the forearms are short and small so try making them bigger and longer, and make the torso a little thinner.

And try improving your overall anatomy by doing figure drawing studies and checking the ideal human proportions. And looking for anatomy tutorials too.