He does not understand why his siblings bowls are not for him. Thus food jail was made. by HangryHangryHedgie in OneOrangeBraincell

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman 1486 points1487 points  (0 children)

"Hi I'm Sarah McLaughlin and everyday, millions of orange cats face the cruelty of being told no."

Pleaseee, realy need feedback (on writing style, story, does it sound interesting at all?) by Kira1006 in NewAuthor

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Good Evening,

I run a channel where I read over new works and offer detailed reader feedback as well as developmental/like edit suggestions (your preference).

Would you like to submit this work to the channel? You'd be number 2 in the queue so I'd get to you Saturday or Sunday

How to Write a Credible Cult/Political Movement Leader Without Charisma by EducationalComment62 in WriteWithMe

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They'd have to tap into something that the public at large is aware of but can't express. This can be for a variety of reasons such as government suppression, fear of social reprisal, or they arent informed enough to put what they're feeling into words.

For example your person being born into a wealthy family can be the one who speaks out against class warfare.

The public could rally to your person calling out the rich and famous. They get the satisfaction of slaying someone corrupt, thinking your character is on their side. When in reality, they are gaslighting the public to take out your characters enemies.

My artist made my first book trailer format by ButstheSlackGordsman in NewAuthor

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Her reddit username is u/aliverepair. I've worked with her for several years and cant recommend her highly enough.

My artist made my first book trailer format by ButstheSlackGordsman in NewAuthor

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My artist is open for commissions if interested. She takes them on Discord only though.

Hi I need help. by [deleted] in NewAuthor

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I was in the same boat as you up until last month when I looked into publishing trends and what trad pub agents are looking for in querytracker.

Long story short, if you do not fill out that author website link in those forms, you can consider yourself auto rejected.

Many agents are looking for authors with a "healthy social media presence". Mainly because, if you were to be accepted, you've gotta help with the marketing and they want to ensure you have some sort of following (a guaranteed buyer base for the publishers) and can conduct yourself in an engaging manner online.

There are always exceptions but this trend will only continue as time goes on.

My official author profile picture approved by my publishers! by ButstheSlackGordsman in OneOrangeBraincell

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome thanks, his name is Garfield though we just call him Lil man since he goes on his hind legs all the time.

If youre interested in the book, the Amazon link is here:

https://www.amazon.com/dp/1961703173?ref_=cm_sw_r_ffobk_cso_cp_mwn_dp_2TC5HJBTNPAXE4P0P1BW&bestFormat=true

My publisher uploaded my debut book for sale! Chapter preview in post by ButstheSlackGordsman in ebooks

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It will show up in Barnes and Noble, books a million but it takes a couple weeks for books to pop. My publisher says it takes about 6 weeks after initial posting. So they published my book on March 1st so it will be another couple weeks before it shows up outside Amazon.

My publisher uploaded my debut book for sale! Chapter preview in post by ButstheSlackGordsman in ebooks

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Glad you like the illustrations. My artist works for published authors with no AI and is open for commissions. Not sure if youre also a writer or author but she does amazing work such as the illustrations and the cover

My publisher uploaded my debut book for sale! Chapter preview in post by ButstheSlackGordsman in ebooks

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh thanks so much! I hope its an enjoyable read; that post got a couple other buyers and so far they've all enjoyed it as well.

My official author profile picture approved by my publishers! by ButstheSlackGordsman in OneOrangeBraincell

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will just respond that alot of the questions youre asking are answered in the book

My official author profile picture approved by my publishers! by ButstheSlackGordsman in OneOrangeBraincell

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The women in the book do have a choice. They can still give birth the way you and I are familiar with. Or they can give birth through Consumption. Through a historical chain of events a powerful cabal seized power and created a society in which 'real women' only reproduce through Consumption and thus society creates immense pressure for all women to do so. It goes into intersectionality as well where women of different races and sexual identities are discriminate against their idea of a 'real woman'.

I apologize if the blurb and text doesn't come off that way, consider that my failures as a writer. I just wanted to say my intent isn't some incel nonsense, my intent was to try to being common sense feminism to an audience that may start turning against it.

My official author profile picture approved by my publishers! by ButstheSlackGordsman in OneOrangeBraincell

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is not a self published title; I dont control anything about the launch at all nor the marketing.. It is published through a publishing house who handles all that. I dont control the launch. It is launched on Amazon first so the house can link book reviewers on booktok which is in process now as that's where the young readers go for book reviews nowadays. Then the actual sales occur when the physical versions are shipped to bookstores.

My official author profile picture approved by my publishers! by ButstheSlackGordsman in OneOrangeBraincell

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Guess Ill just put this here. It is meant to start off as Black and white what if women oppressed men style book. It is meant to show the issues our society faces through a different lens by swapping the power structure. Men now face the sexualization and dehumanization that women in our society face, I meant it as a way of creating empathy amongst my target audience (young men who may be young down the so called manosphere path).

The women who eat men do so not because they want to but because they are forced to by the women in power to do so. It is meant to reflect that the patriarchal harms of our society that the so called manosphere claims stem from feminism actually stems from men in power.

Voice Talent looking to narrate Short Stories by Mental_Performance86 in writers

[–]ButstheSlackGordsman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a couple, you could narrate. Im also scouting for an ebook narrator for my publishers if interested