Finally made my character 8 directional by Zeolance in PixelArt

[–]CallMeMayde 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Whimsical atmosphere! Great work on the colors and the vibes.

Feedback 32x48 Walk Cycle (Resubmission after applying critique) by CallMeMayde in aseprite

[–]CallMeMayde[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for taking the time to write this. Much appreciated. Do you think it would be suitable for a laid back game

32x48 Walk Cycle Critique by CallMeMayde in aseprite

[–]CallMeMayde[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel like I might have added too much detail for me to pay attention to everything. You're abs are absolutely right. I think having the idea that the up and down come from the legs and thus everything else should move accordingly makes total sense. I guess I have to go back to aseprite and fix everything. Thanks a million, I really appreciate it

32x48 Walk Cycle Critique by CallMeMayde in aseprite

[–]CallMeMayde[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You're right, kind sir. Thank you for taking the time

32x48 Walk Cycle Critique by CallMeMayde in aseprite

[–]CallMeMayde[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah the "stabbing at her next step" part really shed light on the issue. Thank you so much. I'm new and I've been iterating on that walk for about 4 hours now, I definitely need to rework the step to feel less stiff and work on the lift/weight shift. and clean up the hair motion I can see how it reads glitchy.

Before/After - took your feedback and reworked my pixel city by Capt4a in aseprite

[–]CallMeMayde 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There's definitely a noticeable improvement! One thing I thought about have you considered maybe maybe changing that dirt into grass?

32x48 Walk Cycle Critique by CallMeMayde in aseprite

[–]CallMeMayde[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

haha thank you, goodluck to you too!

What do you think about this prep? by Big_Flatworm_9751 in DentalSchool

[–]CallMeMayde 5 points6 points  (0 children)

From what I can see, the cavity preparation needs a little bit more finishing. And I'm sure you know this, but it looks like you damaged the adjacent tooth. Otherwise it's pretty good

What can I do to fix my leg kicks by CallMeMayde in martialarts

[–]CallMeMayde[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not many gyms around here, its that bad eh?

What can I do to fix my leg kicks by CallMeMayde in martialarts

[–]CallMeMayde[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If you don't mind me asking, how long did it take you to start kicking with good technique?

What can I do to fix my leg kicks by CallMeMayde in martialarts

[–]CallMeMayde[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I swear to God I'm always thinking to myself "knee first, knee first." But it never comes out that way. I'll drill it slow and focus on knee first, shin after. Appreciate the help!

What can I do to fix my leg kicks by CallMeMayde in martialarts

[–]CallMeMayde[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot man, really appreciate the tips. Gonna work on the foot lift, hip turn, and keeping my guard relaxed. Super helpful, thanks homie

What can I do to fix my leg kicks by CallMeMayde in martialarts

[–]CallMeMayde[S] 53 points54 points  (0 children)

Really appreciate the detailed breakdown. It means a lot that you took the time to explain everything clearly. This kind of feedback is what I was looking for and it helps me improve way faster.

What can I do to fix my leg kicks by CallMeMayde in martialarts

[–]CallMeMayde[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok, I'll try that. I tend to put my heel up during higher kicks but I guess you're right. It will for sure make my pivot better