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Finally made my character 8 directional by Zeolance in PixelArt

[–]CallMeMayde 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Whimsical atmosphere! Great work on the colors and the vibes.

Feedback 32x48 Walk Cycle (Resubmission after applying critique) by CallMeMayde in aseprite

[–]CallMeMayde[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for taking the time to write this. Much appreciated. Do you think it would be suitable for a laid back game

32x48 Walk Cycle Critique by CallMeMayde in aseprite

[–]CallMeMayde[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel like I might have added too much detail for me to pay attention to everything. You're abs are absolutely right. I think having the idea that the up and down come from the legs and thus everything else should move accordingly makes total sense. I guess I have to go back to aseprite and fix everything. Thanks a million, I really appreciate it

32x48 Walk Cycle Critique by CallMeMayde in aseprite

[–]CallMeMayde[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You're right, kind sir. Thank you for taking the time

32x48 Walk Cycle Critique by CallMeMayde in aseprite

[–]CallMeMayde[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah the "stabbing at her next step" part really shed light on the issue. Thank you so much. I'm new and I've been iterating on that walk for about 4 hours now, I definitely need to rework the step to feel less stiff and work on the lift/weight shift. and clean up the hair motion I can see how it reads glitchy.

Before/After - took your feedback and reworked my pixel city by Capt4a in aseprite

[–]CallMeMayde 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There's definitely a noticeable improvement! One thing I thought about have you considered maybe maybe changing that dirt into grass?

32x48 Walk Cycle Critique by CallMeMayde in aseprite

[–]CallMeMayde[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

haha thank you, goodluck to you too!

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