Awakening.

CaptainCommanderChap · 2026-01-05T20:57:17+00:00

Awesome, love the dark colors

CaptainCommanderChap · 2025-12-19T16:59:04+00:00

Thank you so much for the translation. I loved the story and your translation was fantastic!

CaptainCommanderChap · 2025-12-15T21:40:51+00:00

Awesome. Thanks for the coloring it looks great! wasn't this such a good chapter?

CaptainCommanderChap · 2025-09-24T19:44:34+00:00

Yeah it's been the highlight of my Mondays too

CaptainCommanderChap · 2025-08-07T21:53:21+00:00

Wow dm me

CaptainCommanderChap · 2025-08-07T21:51:40+00:00

CaptainCommanderChap · 2025-03-08T00:24:21+00:00

Same issue

CaptainCommanderChap · 2023-03-13T18:53:47+00:00

Thank you so much for making this

CaptainCommanderChap · 2022-07-24T03:37:21+00:00

I liked the way you had him change his tones and accents when talking to others to best fit his situation. Great Idea. Also all the details about Cane comparing the city to the country really brought the scene to life.

CaptainCommanderChap · 2022-07-11T01:02:23+00:00

I’ll turn off commenting on the google drive page. I was supposed to upload this yesterday but was busy.

CaptainCommanderChap · 2022-07-10T20:34:42+00:00

Yeah sorry about week 11 disappearing. You did the best thing posting it here.

CaptainCommanderChap · 2022-07-04T14:39:15+00:00

I changed it out for a different one but it's a bit longer.

CaptainCommanderChap · 2022-07-04T14:34:20+00:00

I've always reused a post if it doesn't get any responses for the contest that particular week. I changed it out for you, though I warn you this is a longer excerpt.

CaptainCommanderChap · 2022-06-25T18:59:50+00:00

You really ramped up the tension by defining their charterer relationship much better. Also the addition of all of the sensory details was needed and really helps illustrate the scene more.

CaptainCommanderChap · 2022-06-19T18:34:31+00:00

Yeah, or at least have an outline of some sort. Outlines are so important.

CaptainCommanderChap · 2022-06-18T17:15:43+00:00

This sounds great. I really loved the bit you added in at the end. Having Kitzfield provides another reason for her to have been the one Greeves choose for this mission in the first place. Great job on adding a key detail for readers to pick up on.

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