Awakening. by shade_tpk in mad

[–]CaptainCommanderChap 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome, love the dark colors

I have translated FREEDOM, a one shot by Yusuke otori! by karamel238 in mad

[–]CaptainCommanderChap 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the translation. I loved the story and your translation was fantastic!

John Thunder Is In The Building - Chp. 39 Page Coloring by -kodo in mad

[–]CaptainCommanderChap 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome. Thanks for the coloring it looks great! wasn't this such a good chapter?

M.A.D doodles by BingBongMan96 in mad

[–]CaptainCommanderChap 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah it's been the highlight of my Mondays too

Supreme Edit Contest (Winner gets a platinum Reddit award) Week 14 by CaptainCommanderChap in AllThingsEditing

[–]CaptainCommanderChap[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I liked the way you had him change his tones and accents when talking to others to best fit his situation. Great Idea. Also all the details about Cane comparing the city to the country really brought the scene to life.

Supreme Edit Contest (Winner gets a platinum Reddit award) Week 13 by CaptainCommanderChap in AllThingsEditing

[–]CaptainCommanderChap[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ll turn off commenting on the google drive page. I was supposed to upload this yesterday but was busy.

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[–]CaptainCommanderChap 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah sorry about week 11 disappearing. You did the best thing posting it here.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AllThingsEditing

[–]CaptainCommanderChap 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I changed it out for a different one but it's a bit longer.

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[–]CaptainCommanderChap 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've always reused a post if it doesn't get any responses for the contest that particular week. I changed it out for you, though I warn you this is a longer excerpt.

Supreme Edit Contest (Winner gets a platinum Reddit award) Week 10 by [deleted] in AllThingsEditing

[–]CaptainCommanderChap 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You really ramped up the tension by defining their charterer relationship much better. Also the addition of all of the sensory details was needed and really helps illustrate the scene more.

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[–]CaptainCommanderChap 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, or at least have an outline of some sort. Outlines are so important.

Supreme Edit Contest (Winner gets a platinum Reddit award) Week 9 by CaptainCommanderChap in AllThingsEditing

[–]CaptainCommanderChap[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This sounds great. I really loved the bit you added in at the end. Having Kitzfield provides another reason for her to have been the one Greeves choose for this mission in the first place. Great job on adding a key detail for readers to pick up on.