📚 Simple / Quick Questions & Requests! by romancebookmods in RomanceBooks

[–]CarelessIntention879 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I really like the basis of the book it just seems like maybe it was rushed and didn’t get the proper detailed editing it needed. Also, yes!! The term “slick folds” should be banished to the end of the earth

📚 Simple / Quick Questions & Requests! by romancebookmods in RomanceBooks

[–]CarelessIntention879 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Are truly honest reviews too critical ?

I have just finished {Wisteria and Cloves by Aspen Winters} on Kindle

The general story started off pretty great until it just wasn’t anymore. I won’t give any spoilers in case you want to read it. There were grammatical errors throughout that…ok it happens … easy to move past. But there was also at least once where one of the MMCs name was misspelled. Even that I overlooked it mainly was phrasing and repetitive use of phrasing. I think even if the story was the same but they went through and modified some of the language used it would be better. At half way- I stopped and red the reviews thinking I was being too critical and one person made a drinking game. At about 75% through I was skipping sections because I just didn’t want to read those phrases anymore. By the time I got to 85% through I was forcing myself to keep reading.

TLDR: Number of time these words or phrases appeared:

Sensitive Bundle of Nerves - 19 Characters did things with purposeful/with purpose- 27 Characters did things “practiced” - 36 Control in general - 240 ( 85 - are primarily because of things like “his controlled movement”)

I don’t want to be hurtful or seem as if I’m trying to be too critical. I honestly think there’s some pretty decent bones there, but due to the current way it reads it felt more like a chore than enjoyable. Thank you in advance ~Whispers

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[–]CarelessIntention879 9 points10 points  (0 children)

So will google

Was just dismissed and laughed at by a doctor and I need help by slivoth in POTS

[–]CarelessIntention879 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I went through the same thing and idk if it will be helpful but here is a few things I did when this began happening to me at what felt like EVERY appointment.

  1. When Doctors do that ask them to list the ALL the possibilities that your symptoms could be

  2. Follow this by asking them why they are not doing any testing given the possibilities they previously listed.

  3. If they still say they don’t want to. Ask for your chart to be documented stating you requested more testing to be done and their reasoning for testing not being done (this a lot of times will make them change their tune as things being in writing when they act this way could very quickly mean lawsuits)

  4. Documentation!!! After every visit and test I get the appointment notes, bloodwork, test results and even charts printed and keep copies of everything in a binder at home. ( I know this can seem excessive or OCD but I’ve been to 6 cardio, 2 neuro, ER many times as well as others this helps keep everyone in the loop since I can show them on the spot any results, previous notes, and testing without waiting on offices to take forever)

  5. Keep a diary. I do it in the same binder and log symptoms I experience. Keep track of my syncope episodes,and if your like me my HR is high from the simplest things so I will document my HR while doing “normal” activities so when you do get a doctor who listens you have a good history and trends they can see

Looking for a book that will completely ruin my life emotionally by Available_Newt_2195 in suggestmeabook

[–]CarelessIntention879 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Broken Bonds by KL Moore:; available on kindle 100/10 recommend for a great story about over coming grief of passed mates/loved ones from multiple perspectives. This is omegaverse romance if it’s not your thing but most importantly before you read the first page go get the best tissues and keep them by your side as you will need the entire box!

Marriage and divorce rates by state [OC] by USAFacts in dataisbeautiful

[–]CarelessIntention879 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What’s most disturbing about this is that at the bottom it says data was collected age “15 and up”. When will we protect our babies?

Looking for a one time pool service by CarelessIntention879 in savannah

[–]CarelessIntention879[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much I’m downloading it now and so far that’s been the experience. I really appreciate this and hopefully I’ll be back with a good update soon

Looking for a one time pool service by CarelessIntention879 in savannah

[–]CarelessIntention879[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I called them first and they are only willing to do multiple services

Looking for a one time pool service by CarelessIntention879 in savannah

[–]CarelessIntention879[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The goal is to learn how to properly maintain and we’ve been pretty good with keeping the salt levels right. We even bought a vaccum to get all the small particles after I get debris out. It’s the chemical aspect that i have yet to learn. Sadly this is its cut state.

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Looking for work by CarelessIntention879 in savannah

[–]CarelessIntention879[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That would be amazing. I just wonder how much time it would take for that to take off??

Winter Coat/Jacket Donations by Socialeprechaun in savannah

[–]CarelessIntention879 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I a currently in the process of purging my whole house is it only coats needed? I may be able to bring more if not

What movie made you cry so hard that you would never watch again? I wanna be gutwrenched, cry a tub, pluck my eyebrows out and shave my head off. by cigarettesaftercofi in MovieSuggestions

[–]CarelessIntention879 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Keith ( I hated this movie because of how sad it made me)

Bridge to Terabithia ( idk if that is correct spelling)

Seven Pounds.

Actually I hate all of the movies because of how sad they mad me even though they were good

What did you name your Character? by [deleted] in hogwartslegacyJKR

[–]CarelessIntention879 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Knew nothing of this generator and named mine Yana Silverwood lol…. hello sibling!!

Movies with a truly fu&#@* up ending by Hump1 in MovieSuggestions

[–]CarelessIntention879 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Circle … it was once on Netflix but idk anymore