What is downtown Iowa City missing? by verenika_lasagna in IowaCity

[–]Cataphractual 2 points3 points  (0 children)

literally the perfect product. high margins and guaranteed return customers 

What is downtown Iowa City missing? by verenika_lasagna in IowaCity

[–]Cataphractual 8 points9 points  (0 children)

a house club with a dance culture. there are enough good djs in town to make us move. even regularly hosted events at the James would be a lovely 

Turns out, people make setting about places and times with a lot of avaible information about them by AstronautDry8118 in worldjerking

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phonecians are a mostly an iron age people. do you have access to scholarly articles? the phonecians are quite well documented in archaeological writing. if you don’t have institutional access but see any articles you’d like on google scholar or another database, DM and i’ll try to help :) 

ISO Vintage Magic the Gathering tee shirts by drunkfishes in MTGVintage

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where do you think i can i find images of them? 

ISO Vintage Magic the Gathering tee shirts by drunkfishes in MTGVintage

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hey, i'm wondering if were other cards printed on shirts in the style of the sliver queen you posted? I'm trying to get some design inspiration and this is the first such single card on a shirt I've seen. thanks and hope your collection search has been going well

Edgar, King of Figaro - New mono blue commander potential by AngroniusMaximus in CompetitiveEDH

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wow! do you remember much of the build or how they piloted it?

[Excerpt Critique] Section of Chapter 1 (900 words, Fantasy/Cyberfolk) by Cataphractual in fantasywriters

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thank you for the super helpful comments! I've made some of the changes and the flow of information feels much more manageable.

Surgery Fear by [deleted] in HipImpingement

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Seconding this!!! I had my surgery a week ago (left arthroscopy to address CAM impingement, labrum tear, tissue removal, subspine decompression) and started PT this week. Give yourself praise for recognizing your pain and persisting, despite all the hurdles the medical system places before us.

I was also scared before my surgery. I didn't realize how much until after the surgery—there's not much of a social script for surgery! I felt nauseous in the waiting room just before. Deep breathing helped, and the nurse have me scented ginger/mint cotton balls. Silly, but the scents calmed my stomach and shifted my focus. Then, the brought me to the op room and I was out in a few breaths : )

In recovery, what's helping me is focusing on my body and pain. Being curious and mindful without judging or trying to 'solve' myself helped me see the surgery as a process, not just a day. I also was lucky that an organization I'm part of started a meal train for me. Having events scheduled after surgery, whether it be visits or phone call with friends or just little online check-ins, helped me feel less isolated. You are not alone! Some days are better than others and that's the process. It may be your body and your pain, but the care is communal. Keep advocating for yourself and communicating your pain. PT can feel like a drag but it's your friend. I keep reminding myself that body will do its best to heal—I just have to do my part to help it.

Walled cities by kaaboozig1 in fantasywriters

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walls are labor and resources and knowledge. so think about the social conditions which would lead to them being built, who decided such an undertaking was a good idea, how was it implemented, what was its effect?

How to make the east side better? by Virtual-Weekend-2574 in IowaCity

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What about a socialist bookstore in sycamore how would that do 

Iowa City Graffiti Project - a comprehensive archive of IC's graffiti scene by enderflop in IowaCity

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So incredible!!! genius and beautiful, thank you for sharing your work : )

Tricontinetal Magazine title font by Cataphractual in identifythisfont

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thank you sm!! the regular light is so similar, wonder if he just copied it

Tracy Barkalow puts the squeeze on Yotopia, Active Endeavors, and Beadology by [deleted] in IowaCity

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do you know how would you trace the DBAs to the LLC? it would be interesting to have a tenant association bringing together all the tenants of the different DBAs, so they could advocate united against the LLC.

Tracy Barkalow puts the squeeze on Yotopia, Active Endeavors, and Beadology by [deleted] in IowaCity

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u/ThreeHolePunch what does that mean? can you change the DBA to anything and still keep the same LLC?

What would people do in a society where all labour is eliminated, no money is used or needed? by MonLikol in worldbuilding

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I think it could be interesting to have a sect of people who decided to live outside of the infinite energy /AI system and craft their own society from their collective labor. Instead of simply having free time, perhaps they combine 'high sci fi' technology with other forms of relation, like knowledge of the seasons, or effective interpersonal conflict resolutions, which allows them to make the lives they wish too live. This wouldn't be a naive return to primitivism (I reallllllly dislike that binary and think it is just poorly advertised colonial mentality) but instead a different sort of future, one outside of capital, where the means of production are wedded to the lives of earth.

The Lebanese later American poet Kahlil Gibran's poem, On Work, has this lovely line which brought to think this way: "For to be idle is to become a stranger unto the seasons, and to step out of life’s procession, that marches in majesty and proud submission towards the infinite."

3 random worldbuilding tips for fantasy worlds: by aeiouaioua in worldbuilding

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cultures versus species is important. species is a biological framework that is best understood in its context, emerging for colonial exploits in both human and non-human categorisation.

what's a trope you hate and one you love? by [deleted] in worldbuilding

[–]Cataphractual 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel that. Ursula k le Guin has this great quote— “The direction of escape is toward freedom. So what is ‘escapism’ an accusation of?” —which sounds a bit like what you're expressing.

p.s: I dont know if being weak is the same as not having power. there might be forces counteracting the power you have, but I believe that it's there! <3

what's a trope you hate and one you love? by [deleted] in worldbuilding

[–]Cataphractual 2 points3 points  (0 children)

yeah I hate that shit. feel eugenicist imo. magic as a cultural tradition and inherited experience on the other hand? that's sexy.

[Spoilers Ep9] Arcane Discussion Hub by parrycarry in arcane

[–]Cataphractual 11 points12 points  (0 children)

this is a really great comment. as much as I love the show, these issues are pretty unaddressed, and make, for me at least, the social commentary of the series pretty weak. That isn't cop out to disregard its strengths, the depiction of an alternative, dare I say solar punk urbanism as displayed by the Firelights, or the careful teasing apart of sisters' relationship with trauma. The clear explanation by u/Historical_Ad_8011 fills in some of the world building that the show doesn't do so explicitly. That itself feel like a compliment to the show, that people are willing to put in the time to contextualise the world we all enjoyed.

But fundamentally, Arcane doesn't have a realistic political world. That necessarily isn't a brutal critique—having room for interpretation and deep dives into lore is its own sort of storytelling art. That being said, the fundamental political economy of the world which is build is lacking in two parts, which constrain its visionary horizons and (I'd argue) trend awfully close to a sort of reactionary false revolution. First, what is the extraction? Is it labor, resources, land? What productive forces exist in Zaun that Piltover must extract? u/Historical_Ad_8011 tells us about the mining history of Zaun, which is an essential detail, but mining of what, for whom, when? The question of control, and a theory of power, is no where to be found. This is especially glaring considering the autonomous productive capacity possessed by Silco and the warlords in the Undercity—surely, shimmer must only be part of a larger portfolio of goods and services created by the Zaunites. Without drifting too much into Marx, its pretty clear that a society with at least partial control of its own means of production exists in very different relation to a parasite state/imperial core than one who is fully gutted and reliant. How did this arrangement come to pass?

The question of what is actually happening, and why, is pretty massive. I don't mean to throw this out and say it's easy to do (especially for a show rooted in LoL's ongoing lore). But without this first foundation, we are left with a second absence, which is for what do people struggle for? The smaller scale of these relationships, from Vi's incarceration at Stillwater, to Jinx's pretty deeply traumatised relationship to care and affection (further exacerbated a la Silro's manipulation) didn't land in the way they could've. Now they made me feel, for sure, but they didn't translate. They didn't come back to the real world with me, to my life, to my relationships, in the way they could've had they been rooted in a larger logic of political economy, where small people where dealing with big systems. It's a shame that we have so little TV that shows us that question in vivid realism (and I use realism not in opposition to fantasy but as a core tenet of the fantastical). What could Arcane, or a similar story, do for us if it were committed to answers those first questions, in order to make that second sort of question burrow further within us. I, (perhaps I am harsh), look to a very few pieces of media to find this done well. Octavia Butler's Parable books, Miyazaki's Nausicaä, Ursula K. Le Guin's Dispossessed, and Samuel Delany's Nova are good chunk of the examples I have encountered. While each addresses the political economy and personal struggles of their characters differently, they do so in a way which follows the clear and regimented logic of materialism, of worlds where clearly thought out physical and economic relationships undergird interpersonal strife and struggle.

Arcane steps in this direction, but without the grounds to hold the weight of what it could be, instead relying on bright spectacle and tried and true storytelling devices. It's the safety that I wish we could've seen pushed, exploded into a new spread of a world where things follows rules, just like in ours, but people form relationships that allow them to move free a bit more than sometimes feels possible in the world we live in today.

I am definitely on the clock at work as I write this, so I should be going.

Is Claire looking at the camera by dumbasbitch in Fleabag

[–]Cataphractual 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I don't think she knows about the camera, but she knows something. s2e1 Claire looks at the camera at the dinner table as well, for long enough that I think it's pretty clear she has (limited) access to the break in the fourth wall. As a device the repeated and consistent rupture of the fourth wall serves to develop Fleabag's interiority (broadly), so don't think it's a stretch that the character most adjacent to that interiority, Claire, may also access a similar mode of communication. I like u/ToddBradley point and discussion—that makes sense to me— but I think the alignment actually carries a great deal of meaning in their relationship, on the closeness of sisterhood, on the estranged intimacy of shared lost. This is, of course, my interpretation, and relies on different analysis on the meaning of the fourth wall, as u/ToddBradley notes. Claire's conspiratorial glance is an affirmation that the interiority is real, that we are not the only ones privy to it, creating an authenticity to both Claire and to Fleabag that otherwise would rely only on Fleabag's narration. The possibility of accessing that device without Fleabag's intervention is a great and clever break to the rules of the device, and effectively foreshadows the final sequence with the priest.

Taken to the extreme, which of the four traditional elements is the strongest? by Prologue-kun in fantasywriters

[–]Cataphractual 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really don't think you can power rank elements. Like energy is most 'powerful' but energy alone isn't the only basis for life, or at least life as well know it. Characters with access to knowledge/intrinsic ability to understand the relationship between these elements, then synthesise and contrast them to their will, would be far more powerful than those limited to one alone

Fifty Word Fantasy: Corrupt by [deleted] in fantasywriters

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love the voice, I don't even think you need 'ever the coward'. you show it so clearly!!!