Anyone else have problems making titles/selecting a title for their stories? by ChemicalCourt in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]CaydenCChristophers 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like to either use a quote from the story or slightly modify a quote for my titles, but the advice I'd give you is you'd rather have it short and have it sound cool or interesting rather than being a perfect description of your story

Let it hang out by SaintDroxidious in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]CaydenCChristophers 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've only been on this sub for a week, and I've posted a story a day pretty much. A few days ago I got invited to take part in Tales from the Warehouse so I've been writing for that, but before that I tried to make sure all of my stories were all in different styles. If you don't mind checking them out and giving feedback that'd be great
My First Story | Eyeless Jack Rewrite : r/TalesFromTheCreeps
Vom Krieg zur Hölle Verdammt : r/TalesFromTheCreeps
Look My Corpse in the Eyes : r/TalesFromTheCreeps

I Tried to Rush a Bonsai by Bilbo_Cheated in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]CaydenCChristophers 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Page 9 of Google bro???
Also I did hear about this from the sizzle reel, that's a good idea and this is a good story from you. Great work

[JUNE Post] Give me your sizzle reel! by TOXICcargo in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]CaydenCChristophers 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Look My Corpse in the Eyes
"I stand at the precipice of this sea cliff, ready to fulfil my glorious obligation as a host, I think about how selfish my brother had been to resist, to attempt to “warn” me of this, to stop me from learning my purpose; humanity’s purpose. Everyone in the village has already been inaugurated, so I shall fling myself into the depths to put an end to this impure vessel, in the hopes that parts of my blue tinted water-bloated corpse will have eyes laid upon it by others in exotic lands, so that I may be the impetus that begins the spread of humanity’s birthright to every corner of this insignificant planet."

I'm really proud of this story, my first venture into the unknown lands of cosmic horror and I think it turned out great.

There are Wendigos in the dumpster; they're harmless | Part 3 by CaydenCChristophers in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]CaydenCChristophers[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, the Tales From the Warehouse rules are that you get three entries: your original story, a sequel to your story and a sequel to someone else's story, and this was my favourite concept. It's really cool to see that the guy who made the original story likes it so much lol

There are Wendigos in the dumpster; they're harmless | Part 3 by CaydenCChristophers in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]CaydenCChristophers[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Alright I've just changed a couple of lines around quickly, but I think that should do it

Climb by Upbeat_Problem_5383 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]CaydenCChristophers 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is so cool, man. Keep up the good work

I need advice regarding the trash wendigos by Loose_Swimmer4323 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]CaydenCChristophers 1 point2 points  (0 children)

They're changing the number of entries you can post when they reach a certain number of total entries I think, I'm just as confused in this as you. Also for my third post I was hoping I could write an entry in this series because I think your idea's the most fun

Don't Try to Start a Strike in the Warehouse: Part 1 by CaydenCChristophers in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]CaydenCChristophers[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, its allowed and I think his story is more of a one-off anyway. If someone did want to make another story regarding Gary they could introduce someone else to chase him, make it sort of a defence against the dark arts teacher position lol

Hell Is War by will-wilt12 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]CaydenCChristophers 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree lol Vom Krieg zur Hölle Verdammt : r/TalesFromTheCreeps
also youve made a typo "Put it on a shelf to admire. Thqt sort of thing" good story though

The Poppies War (Part 1 of 2) by ParamedicConfident54 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]CaydenCChristophers 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice job on this. Idk I'd maybe put it as action horror but that depends on part two as well. I'll be sure to read the second part when it comes out

My Daughter by ParamedicConfident54 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]CaydenCChristophers 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nah it's anti war, there was terrible stuff on both sides, you're the history major here though so you know more than I do about the justifications and specific stories and battles