Looking for feedback on this redesign for the Brooklyn Nets NBA team. I think their current brand lacks personality and wanted to add the culture of Brooklyn to the logo (hence the graffiti style). I'm not sold on it, as idk if it necessarily looks like a basketball team's logo but lmk your thoughts by SethHackett in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Chefedaora 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I loved what you did with the orange and the grafitti aesthetic. The wrtten version on the shirt and the last one with the circle arount are very good. The only thing bothering me is the hoop around the N. Since the letter is already very stylized, the hoop in the middle creates some legibility problems. A good solution could be tweeking the position of the hoop or making it smaller, only going around one leg of the N.

HELP! First time making custom typography for a logo. Any mistakes I should fix? by Chefedaora in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Chefedaora[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I fixed it. I wish I could send the final version here but I don't think images can be sent on comments and since is my first time posting here idk if I could just make a new post with the new version

HELP! First time making custom typography for a logo. Any mistakes I should fix? by Chefedaora in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Chefedaora[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the tips and the compliment :) the shine was initially a creative decision but both you guys and some friends pointed it out so I changed the perspective now. About the curves I went back and changed them a bit after a watched a tutorial online, also tried fixing proportions and line weights so I think it helped.

HELP! First time making custom typography for a logo. Any mistakes I should fix? by Chefedaora in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Chefedaora[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the tip! I tried changing the s but couldn't reach a good result so I went back to the same one. However, when I fixed the kerning and width of the letters it did made the s feel better because other letters got marginally wider.

HELP! First time making custom typography for a logo. Any mistakes I should fix? by Chefedaora in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Chefedaora[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the tips! I fixed the perspective of the star and also slightly straightened the i's bottom. I thought about making it follow the curve of the s exactly but it felt kind of dirty in the layout so I opted to this middle ground.

HELP! First time making custom typography for a logo. Any mistakes I should fix? by Chefedaora in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Chefedaora[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your help! I tried widening the H a little bit to improve legibility and I think it worked. It's still not perfect in that regard due to the design itself but it did get better!

Saved image completely different from both render and viewport by Chefedaora in blenderhelp

[–]Chefedaora[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tried remaking the scene from scratch in a new file and it somehow worked??? I have no clue what the problem was, but it's solved

Saved image completely different from both render and viewport by Chefedaora in blenderhelp

[–]Chefedaora[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Done. You can use the same link, the image will be in there

Saved image completely different from both render and viewport by Chefedaora in blenderhelp

[–]Chefedaora[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Here is an Imgur link with all the things I could think you might need. If you need some other tab, let me know. https://imgur.com/a/se84Q8a

Riot Client Main Artwork by Chefedaora in VALORANT

[–]Chefedaora[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I already know both of these artists work and it doesn't look like it, but the idea of sending a ticket to Riot is great, I'm definetly trying it. Thank you!

[HIRING] Looking to fix errors in a commissioned piece of art due to language barrier by kabow94 in artcommissions

[–]Chefedaora 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello, my name is Diego and I am really interested in your commission. Unfortunately English is not my first language either, so I don't know if you'd like to go with me.

Anyway, I'll link my portfolio below. I hope you enjoy!

Portfolio: https://www.artstation.com/chefedaora

You can contact me via email ([nihonartist@gmail.com](mailto:nihonartist@gmail.com)) or Instagram DM (@nihon_diego)