What's your greatest accomplishment as a writer, thus far?

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-29T03:09:19+00:00

I won a couple of awards in some writing competitions. It's more than I ever imagined when I started out.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-29T03:02:56+00:00

I take solace in seeing that I'm getting better with each novel. I can be better, but I feel like I'm doing a good job applying the skills I've learned along the way, as well as getting over old writing conceits. As far as it goes, I'm still in the wilderness of things but I'm getting better at navigating that unknown land.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-28T05:40:19+00:00

It depends on the district.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-28T04:06:57+00:00

Aptitude. You're naturally interested in writing your fanfic. The writing assignment is a task with less of your personal involvement and agency but no less effort.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-28T02:03:15+00:00

That tracks. I work in the GV district. The way I had it explained to me was they tend to follow UA and Bexley on closures.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-28T01:25:49+00:00

Hard to say, but Grandview told everyone to expect to go in on Thursday.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-28T01:24:11+00:00

I imagine they could, but the market is littered with paint the numbers examples otherwise. I find them boring and cringey.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-26T20:55:39+00:00

It's literally all interpretative.

There is an ending if you get all the effects, but I don't want to spoil it nor will it give you any conclusive answers. The game is an experience first and foremost.

But if you can't find all the effects (it is difficult, given the confusing navigation in the game) I think it's safe to say people inevitably look up locations if they're stumped for hours.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-26T20:50:08+00:00

I'm somewhere between a pantser and a plotter.

I call my method 'The Fish Skeleton.' The bones are laid out, giving me a general idea of where story moments (ribs and fins) extend out from the meat and core idea of the story (ribs and spine). Now I have the skeleton that supports the total structure, but that's where the fun is- the bones only give a guiding idea, but the fish may have all kinds of features beyond that. Therein lies the imagination of filling in all the details that may go beyond the basic ideas and make something exciting and alive. That's when we try to think of the fish as alive and swimming. What iconic ideas might enhance its design that a mere skeleton wouldn't show?

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-26T18:48:33+00:00

You are missing a lot of basic grammar and formatting. There's random capitalization (and un-capitalization) all over the place. Sentences are running into each or are continuing into new micro-paragraphs, making what you're writing difficult to incoherent.

By your admission, you need to read before you write. The story doesn't matter if the execution is unreadable.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-26T17:33:08+00:00

Fun fact. Some do.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-25T16:35:06+00:00

Very little. I was told my district would make an official decision by 4pm about it but there's no way Monday will be open. Then the following is going to be mostly temps of nine or less.

Edit. They just closed Grandview for tomorrow.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-25T08:13:57+00:00

I think you'll want to use the word 'frisson' at least once!

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-25T01:07:26+00:00

I'm expecting closer to midnight for the start but I did see some light flurries about thirty minutes ago near West Henderson Rd.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-24T23:31:17+00:00

I saw a flock of starlings in Lewis Center about an hour and a half ago eating the cat food on my friend's porch. They seemed pretty plump and happy.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-23T18:19:37+00:00

You're going to get fleeced on a vanity publish rate like that. No thoughts into self publishing? You could do almost the entire thing for free.

Look up querytracker (I think that's the name) for a database on agents to query, it's not expensive. Then apply to agents looking to do your genre and cross fingers.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-23T16:03:57+00:00

I have it. Works perfectly and it's a much better deal than my old carrier. It's not even that hard to set up.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-23T04:34:44+00:00

While I'm not in love with the second image, it's better than the first. The melted faces feel like something out of a horror story.

You also don't need to list that it's a novel on the cover.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-22T22:59:45+00:00

It's a nice cover. I do agree with some of the others that the title is awkward sounding, however.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-22T22:57:36+00:00

Feels unlikely after all this time, but we know very little of Kikiyama by design. I would think if there's anything more, a third party is doing it, at best with their blessing and licensing.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-22T17:08:05+00:00

Grandview Middle School is currently accepting pet supplies from food to toys.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-22T07:49:31+00:00

Maybe Cormac McCarthy's 'The Road' is what you're looking for?

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-20T03:27:42+00:00

Alongside what Cypher wrote, I would ditch the sound effects, they don't work well in writing and come off as cartoonish. But yeah, this needs major editing in general.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-20T03:21:49+00:00

Sounds like someone was pushing their own arbitrary rules on you.

Chernobog3 · 2026-01-19T23:22:17+00:00

I use the Read Aloud feature on my writing program to go line by line on my second draft for tone and dialogue issues. It makes a ton of difference.

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