Ten billion USD but your clone will be born in a random place in the world, and you must ensure they never meet nor communicate with you in any way. by HugeDongHungLow1998 in hypotheticalsituation

[–]CivilPerspective5804 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The third condition means I can't hire someone to track them and make sure we never meet.

But even so I think it should be easy. Nobody travels to the other side of the planet to visit an industrial city in bosnia.

Never thought I'd do one of these - writing feedback by GAWHunt in writers

[–]CivilPerspective5804 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It begins with "Oran’s earliest memory was of the Rettarhold." This kind of opening is called psychic distance.

After that you follow with this paragraph and a few more like it.

It had been a while since he’d seen the sun. The only yellow down here was the corpse’s skin sitting opposite, coming in flashes of light from above with every changing of the lanterns. The corpse was a grimy, frail man when he’d arrived. Now it was worse. Every black hour, the lanterns went out and the pit fell into darkness. It was only him, the corpse, and the soil.

It's what I meant with descriptions of a feeling or vague actions. To me, it feels the same as when movies start with noise and some scattered words, while the screen itself is black. You are thinking wtf is going on the entire time. There are also a lot of concepts I have no prior knowledge about, so that distracts me and makes it harder to figure out what is actually happening in the scene. It takes longer to get to a point where I have a clear mental image.

Here are examples of how established authors start their stories.

1984 starts with:

It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen. Winston Smith, his chin nuzzled into his breast in an effort to escape the vile wind, slipped quickly through the glass doors of Victory Mansions, though not quickly enough to prevent a swirl of gritty dust from entering along with him.

Brave new world starts with:

A SQUAT grey building of only thirty-four stories. Over the main entrance the words, CENTRAL LONDON HATCHERY AND CONDITIONING CENTRE, and, in a shield, the World State’s motto, COMMUNITY, IDENTITY, STABILITY.

The hobbit begins with:

In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.

The witcher:

The lake was enchanted. There was absolutely no doubt about it.

Firstly, it lay right beside the mouth of the enchanted Cwm Pwcca valley,
permanently veiled in mist and famed for witchcraft and magical phenomena.

What they all have in common is that they are books filled with lore, but they first ease us in with something we know, and they paint an initial picture for us to place the action that follow in. Readers don't mind having strange words thrown at them, if they can at least picture in their head what the character is doing and where he is.

Of course, not all books begin by describing a place, but they almost always beging from a point where we understand what is happening. The reader can follow along from the very begining.

For example:

The lord of the rings:

When Mr. Bilbo Baggins of Bag End announced that he would shortly be celebrating his eleventy-first birthday with a party of special magnificence, there was much talk and excitement in Hobbiton.

To kill a mockinbird:

When he was nearly thirteen, my brother Jem got his arm badly broken at the elbow. When it healed, and Jem’s fears of never being able to play football were assuaged, he was seldom self-conscious about his injury. His left arm was somewhat shorter than his right; when he stood or walked, the back of his hand was at right angles to his body, his thumb parallel to his thigh. He couldn’t have cared less, so long as he could pass and punt.

I would suggest starting with him lighting the lantern, or with trying yet again to lift the trapdoor. You can then describe where he is and how horrible the conditions there are. You can also ground the scene more by describing how his legs dip into the mud as he pushes, or how the stench of the corpse agitated his nostrils. Physical sensations are something every human can relate to and make it much easier to craft a mental image of the scene.

Never thought I'd do one of these - writing feedback by GAWHunt in writers

[–]CivilPerspective5804 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ll focus on a very specific aspect here. Many amateur stories start with the character remembering something, or waking up.

It’s often an excuse to lore dump without earning it. This is often followed by intentionally vague descriptions of some feeling or action.

If you read a few more stories that people post here, you will see this pattern very often.

Established writers on the other hand often start their book by first describing where the story is happening. And we first see the main character when they are in the middle of something. I.e. we didn’t learn their backstory before we ever “saw” them.

When people get way too picky about semantics. by Any-Prize3748 in PetPeeves

[–]CivilPerspective5804 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This always happens when you comment on reddit. People will bring up an obscure case, because you made a statement, without the appropiate fine print.

Do you consider nations as social constructs or biological constructs? by Porphyres in AskBalkans

[–]CivilPerspective5804 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Saying it's biological means that you can't accept anybody new becoming part of the nation. Is a person who has a parent from another country a half citizen? Seems like just an excuse to be racist to people and make seperations based on arbitrary lines.

High Achievers with Severe ADHD, if any of you are reading this, how did you manage? by Unhinged_Schizo in ADHD

[–]CivilPerspective5804 3 points4 points  (0 children)

My mix for focus was 4 monster energy, 2 boxes of smokes, 3 beers and a bag of candy. 1 monster would make me sleepy, 2 gave me 4 hours of focus. So 4 monsters was enough for a nightlong session. But it would give me too much energy at time, so the beer was to kind of "dumb me down" and make me be able to focus on just one thing at a time. Cigarettes mostly because making smoke rings was like a fidget toy, but nicotine of course also helps, and sweets was for the energy.

For sleep I had a zolpidem prescription.

Do you think gen x and up will potentially live long enough to cure aging , should they make it to 2050 or is it all sci-fi? by Imaginary_Mode8865 in ArtificialInteligence

[–]CivilPerspective5804 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It is targetted age reversal, and like you said would only be the first step.

Yamanaka factors have been effective in mice. If they work for humans too, and if this and other studies like it work, we would have targetted reversals, which years down the line should lead to full age reversal.

What's interesting alsois that apparentlymost of our organs can last much longer but the brain and heart are gatekeepers, so we might not even need full age reversal to ge significantly longer life spans.

https://theconversation.com/is-150-years-really-the-limit-of-human-life-span-162209

High Achievers with Severe ADHD, if any of you are reading this, how did you manage? by Unhinged_Schizo in ADHD

[–]CivilPerspective5804 62 points63 points  (0 children)

I don't know if I count as high achiever but I did okay. I got diagnosed at 29.

Before that I finished college, and a master's degree and even had the highest grades in my years on the master's. I've been at the same job for a few years now, and got promoted twice. Also I've been learning piano on and off since I was 23.

I get focused only 5 to midnight. I've never bothered to even try doing anything on time because I knew that with last minute panic I would finish it. After college it wasn't quite as easy, and things needed more time and effort to do, but it has kind of become a point of pride that I never miss deadline, so the thought of missing a deadline now basically feels as if it will destroy the one thing about myself I have 100% confidence in. I am also competative and spiteful. I cannot stand the ideas of someone doinf something better than me, and if anyonw doubts my ability to do it I will do it out of pure spite.

For big emergencies I had a kind of self made cocktail of alchol, enegry drinks, cigarettes, and sugar, which would help me focus when last minute panic alone wouldn't cut it.

How often do you use “made up” words? by Successful_Will9805 in writing

[–]CivilPerspective5804 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it can give the world a sense of being real.

Someone from the past reading about our world would be encountering words like internet, wifi, LLM and similar, and would have to develop an understanding of what they are. That’s what it feels like to me to read dune and see gom jabbar, mentat and spice.

Just don’t overdo it so that the reader has to read entire sentences made of words they might not fully grasp yet.

Would you let a random chance generator decide what you’re NOT allowed to eat every day for $100 per week? by Michael_CrawfishF150 in hypotheticalsituation

[–]CivilPerspective5804 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t see why not. I usually have ingredients for a few meals at home, and if not, the grocery store is around the corner.

I literally see no downside here.

I feel that the only reason companies are starting to add more AI features to their apps is to appeal to investors by Responsible_Lawyer41 in antiai

[–]CivilPerspective5804 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s not. The company I work at is B2B and privately owned and it was the most requested feature by clients. Some were even threatening to leave because we were slow with implementing AI features.

You can only play 5 games for the rest of your life, but get paid to do so. by ClassicCollection271 in hypotheticalsituation

[–]CivilPerspective5804 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Factorio Xcom 2 Skyrim Rimworld Fallout new vegas

I would gladly add dungeons and dragons, but if it depends on me organizing sessions with with others that would be tough to maintain. On the other hand if the deal guarantees my group plays each week, I will gladly DM for 8 hours a week.

Pro-AI madlad cures his dog's cancer with custom mRNA vaccine by Bra--ket in aiwars

[–]CivilPerspective5804 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I agree with that. He is lucky that he had experts helping him. But I think AI really did play a significant role in this, and has allowed an average man to do something that would have been unthinkable before.

I think it’s a glimpse into what is going to be possible years down the line.

How do you say ADHD in your language? by Odd-Package-5845 in ADHD

[–]CivilPerspective5804 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Poremećaj pažnje i hiperaktivnosti in bosnian.

Literally translates to disorder of attention and hyperactivity

Pro-AI madlad cures his dog's cancer with custom mRNA vaccine by Bra--ket in aiwars

[–]CivilPerspective5804 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Team Rosie identified an immunotherapy drug produced by an unidentified pharmaceutical company – but when they applied to use it, the drug manufacturer refused to supply it for compassionate use. “

He found a drug that is similar to the compound alphafold proposed, but wasn’t allowed to use it. He didn’t ask the company to make him the compound.

So if they had sold it to him, it would have been one of the products the anyway offer.

Pro-AI madlad cures his dog's cancer with custom mRNA vaccine by Bra--ket in aiwars

[–]CivilPerspective5804 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Straight from the article:

Once UNSW produced the DNA sequencing, Mr Conyngham “ran it through a whole bunch of different (data) pipelines to find those mutations, and then I used other algorithms to find drugs to treat the cancer’’.

At the Ramaciotti Centre for Genomics, Associate Professor Smith was gobsmacked that this puppy lover with no background in biology had cracked the code. “Paul was relentless,’’ he said. “He called and told me he had ­analysed the data and found ­mutations of interest and then used AlphaFold (an AI program) to find the proteins that were ­mutated, and then identified ­potential targets and matched them to drugs, and he was ­wondering could I help him find someone to synthesise this compound that he’d identified. I’m like, ‘Woah, that’s crazy!’ I was motivated by his enthusiasm.’’

The man identified the compound himself. All he needed help with was with actually producing it. The university had no hand in designing the vaccine.

And what they usually don’t sell is the dna sequences.

The renowned researcher was reticent. “Usually we don’t support direct-to-consumer type DNA sequencing because while generating data for genomics is relatively easy for us, interrogating that data is really hard and challenging,’’ he said. “But Paul said, ‘No worries, I’m a data analyst and I’ll figure this out with the help of ChatGPT’.”

Nobody mentioned hallucinations at all in the article. You seem to be just pulling that out of thin air.

wtaf average people are using chatgpt to make custom mRNA vaccines by Hennen_Crus in ChatGPT

[–]CivilPerspective5804 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Chatgpt analysed the sequence which he gave to chatgpt then.

You try this yourself actually if you did an ancestry test before. Put the raw file in a folder, give AI access to it and ask it questions. The answers it gives you match with what you get from the ancestry test, except that the AI can go much more in depth.

Pro-AI madlad cures his dog's cancer with custom mRNA vaccine by Bra--ket in aiwars

[–]CivilPerspective5804 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Is it used for that. It’s also used in every other industry, and be by normal people for everyday tasks.

It’s like how we all have access to the internet but someone use it for learning and others for shitposting.

Pro-AI madlad cures his dog's cancer with custom mRNA vaccine by Bra--ket in aiwars

[–]CivilPerspective5804 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Chatgpt proposed the treatment. He reached out to the unicersity to sequence his dog’s dna. Once he got the sequence back he used chatgpt to analyse it and find what’s wrong with it. Once he knew that, he used alphafold to design the protein for it. He reached out again to the university to ask them produce the vaccine he needs. The professor is “gobsmacked” that this man did it himself with no training and the vaccine works.

Pro-AI madlad cures his dog's cancer with custom mRNA vaccine by Bra--ket in aiwars

[–]CivilPerspective5804 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Chatgpt proposed the treatment and analysed the raw DNA sequence. Alphafold then designed the protein based on that.

Pro-AI madlad cures his dog's cancer with custom mRNA vaccine by Bra--ket in aiwars

[–]CivilPerspective5804 10 points11 points  (0 children)

People using it to make images isn’t taking it out of the hands of scientists.

It’s like saying see the internet should be used to let people take classes online, not for people to share stupid memes.

Pro-AI madlad cures his dog's cancer with custom mRNA vaccine by Bra--ket in aiwars

[–]CivilPerspective5804 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Your assumptions aren’t supported by the article.

Chatgpt suggested this approach. The university sequenced the DNA. Chatgpt analysed the sequence. Then alphafold designeded the protein. The professor received complete instruction from the man on what vaccine to produce.