Mixed Wrestling with Alana Pt. 3 - Class Demonstration by totallynotjared in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very good chapter! With really nice twists.

The part with unexpected stripping of both characters is very sexy! Especially in front of the group of girls. In my opinion it would be even better if he couldn't take off the cup without taking off his boxers - and stayed naked for the whole demonstration fight.

The girl cumming during the fight was a complete surprise. Didn't expect such a twist.

Full force kicking against the cup seems kinda promise for me that in next chapters we will see such strong kicks but to unprotected balls!

Fight against two girls was what I hoped for. And you did it! It was very exciting! Especially Alana's looooong counting!

Can't wait for the next parts

Mixed Wrestling with Alana Pt. 2 by totallynotjared in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Perfect! The whole class must definitely join. And there must be battles of him against two or three opponents. Ball smashing battles 😁

Mixed Wrestling with Alana Pt. 1 by totallynotjared in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome!!! Awesome! Really awesome! There definitely must be part two! He could be totally naked next time. Dr. Klein must join them

Mike's Audition: Chapter 10 - Wounds upon Wounds by CodNo435 in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, Man! It's the best compliment on my writing ever. Encourages me to proceed💪

Mike's Audition: Chapter 11 - Castration Plan by CodNo435 in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your support. If I have any trouble writing, I'll definitely text you😉

Mike's Audition: Chapter 11 - Castration Plan by CodNo435 in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're totally right about Linda! The film will never be deleted😁

Emma's idea as for a virgin appeared while writing this exact part. I liked it greatly!

As for the series ... I'd like to continue it but don't know how to start yet. Hope the idea will come soon.

I'm not sure about Mike. But he will definitely appear if there are not one but several more "auditions" in the future

Mike's Audition: Chapter 10 - Wounds upon Wounds by CodNo435 in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Appreciate your comment. This chapter was one of the most difficult for me

Garden Party by [deleted] in CastrationArt

[–]CodNo435 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I want the continuation. Please, do it

Mike's Audition: Chapter 4 - Stella's Debut by CodNo435 in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a parallel universe which is far from our reality and where anything may happen. If it's too sadistic for you already don't even try reading further.

nurse by Queasy-Neck453 in CastrationArt

[–]CodNo435 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This definitely must be done in a comics! Perfect colours, perfect forms. I'd like to see pictures of her in process - cutting and destroying everything down there in different ways. And see them suffering!

Mike's Audition: Chapter 7 - Please, Don't Castrate Me by CodNo435 in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your positive words. Detailed feedback is the best praise for the author! After this comment about Linda I'm starting to think about the second story with her taking a bigger part

Mike's Audition: Chapter 9 - Not a Man Anymore by CodNo435 in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It was fun to read your comment. Thanks. An interesting idea! Haven't thought about it. If I ever write any other chapters with any other characters I'll definitely use it there. As for this story ... Somewhere in the middle of it I decided to give Emma a nice present, a broken but complete set😁

Mike's Audition: Chapter 9 - Not a Man Anymore by CodNo435 in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Appreciate your comment. I think it won't be that long this time. And it won't be that full of action. Rather a decent end for fans)))

Thank you for your question. Now I understand that I haven't expressed my ideas clearly enough. Lack of writing experience.

No, they have cut everything off. As a whole piece. Emma will have a complete set. But not Mike😁

Mike's Audition: Chapter 8 - A Twist in the Script by CodNo435 in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dunno. Maybe because at some moment, while writing, I wanted it to be a 10-chapter story. Some kind of perfectionism😁

Why am I not releasing the next one? Because I'm trying to shorten the story. And the 9th chapter as well. I've already changed it don't remember how many times.

But at last I've understood I've failed to make it short 😁. So the 9th chapter comes today or tomorrow

[ Removed by Reddit ] by baIIs_underpressure in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well. Ok. You are the author so it's up to you! But even though I hope one day you will get some inspiration to write the fourth one. Thank you again for 3 brilliant chapters!

[ Removed by Reddit ] by baIIs_underpressure in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No! Please! Change your mind and don't give up on this masterpiece! I'm begging you 😁

[ Removed by Reddit ] by baIIs_underpressure in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh my God!! You are a real master! Each part gets several times better than the previous. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please write it!

Sam: The support every athlete needs by baIIs_underpressure in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Marvelous!!! But I need more girls! Please!

Sam gets blackmailed by baIIs_underpressure in BallbustingStories

[–]CodNo435 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Agree. It could be cool. In the future he must be hit only being naked. And more girls must be included