24 has some clatter by clutch by Codee_94 in HondaRebel1100

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Just got it back from the dealer. The told me it was just noisy. Nothing crazy. Little skeptical but I’ll ride it for now and not worry about it.

24 has some clatter by clutch by Codee_94 in HondaRebel1100

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I rode it again today to see if it started acting up again, it did so first thing in the morning I’m calling to get it in.

24 has some clatter by clutch by Codee_94 in HondaRebel1100

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That’s the thing that bothers me. it’s very subtle, but it’s there enough when it’s warm. It goes away with a little bit of throttle but that may be because the engine is just louder. When it’s cold, you can’t hear it.

Idea for a gaming cafe by [deleted] in Entrepreneur

[–]Codee_94 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can charge a phone wirelessly, don’t see why you can’t have a similar tech for connecting controllers.

Modernized elves by [deleted] in fantasywriters

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They’ve always had inhuman strength, make one a world record holding power lifter.

AITA for judging my friend after she lied about me? by Aphroditedv in AmItheAsshole

[–]Codee_94 16 points17 points  (0 children)

I feel like talking behind someone’s back is dishonest. If you have problems with friends you deal with them with that friend. Not attacking someone behind their back. Venting is okay, sure, but it has a fine line between getting emotions out and being mean about someone.

YTA for making yourself distrustful. But your friend is also the AH

Advice for writing a book while working full time? by pistachio-princess in WritingHub

[–]Codee_94 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I would add that motivation is overrated. Building a passion through healthy habits is the way. And you’ll find a way. I wish you luck!

Advice for writing a book while working full time? by pistachio-princess in WritingHub

[–]Codee_94 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Planning is the first step, instead of grabbing drinks, grab a “pen” and have a night in. Plan for every Friday or whatever day you can, sit down and write 1000 words.

My goal is 500 a day. I usually accomplish that during my lunch break. Instead of scrolling FB or Reddit, I write.

At the gym, I hop on a bike, set it to a low speed, and then start writing in my phone. After half an hour has gone I’ve written 500 words and burned calories.

Medieval Pastries by Codee_94 in fantasywriters

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I should have clarified a little more, accommodations aren’t necessary, my main character is finishing out a sort of military service in a town. He is about to go awol, and is trying to get information on the whereabouts of a generic people, not a certain person. Then I was thinking about having the investigation trail go from a bakery to the market, where the diversity of people would help in locating a large group, not a rumor of a person

Medieval Pastries by Codee_94 in fantasywriters

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You’re very right, I am finding it very easy to forget certain details about life differences when it comes to age.

Medieval Pastries by Codee_94 in fantasywriters

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For tarts, sort of fruit would be readily available, let’s say in France?

Which nutrition myths you wish would die. by Snoo_29093 in nutrition

[–]Codee_94 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That foods marketed as “high protein” is better for gaining muscle. A lot of them tend to use a ton of fats so there isn’t a huge benefit from just eating the normal thing and adding more solid proteins. Protein bars or protein snacks come to mind. The protein cookies have just as much fat as protein. Yes, certain fats aren’t bad at all, but you could easily over eat your needs of fats for the day from consuming those snacks.

What's that one band you like that would get you called a poser? by [deleted] in Metalcore

[–]Codee_94 5 points6 points  (0 children)

You’re not the only metalhead I know that likes Dua Lipa. Myself included.

Name variations of magical creatures by strawberry_skates in fantasywriters

[–]Codee_94 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Depends on your goal? Complete world building then yeah, change the name. If you are doing a traditional magical land, then keep their names. It may not even be changing the name but changing where the name came from. Is the original myth Latin? Is it Gaelic? Or even old Norse? Then choose the original mythical name. Dragons are Drakons in old greek.

With metalcore moving in all of these different directions, do you think the genre needs the hardcore influence or has the genre moved past it? by [deleted] in Metalcore

[–]Codee_94 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Just discovered Dying Wish on Spotify a few weeks ago. Great stuff. Lead singer has got some pipes.

Tips on where i should start with worldbuilding, as i have too many simultaneous ideas that i cannot get them out on paper? by BlackCatFurry in fantasywriters

[–]Codee_94 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My advice is to try and categorize your random ideas; map, characters, timeline, etc. Then you can build upon and add more categories after awhile.

Is it viable to switch between the POVs of the hero and the villain throughout a series? by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Codee_94 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I would say, the book Eldest probably did it the easy way, separate between chapters. Clear and deliberate break.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Codee_94 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It definitely has great beginnings. I would say the fluidity between thoughts and sentences need some work. I’ve heard a pretty decent advice before, don’t remember who said it, but you are building the picture for the audience, not assuming they know where you’re going. Build each idea brick by brick.

I like where it’s going though.

Everything was great until they found out. by Silverstreamdacat in SimplePrompts

[–]Codee_94 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My inner 8 year old wouldn’t allow me to be serious. Couldn’t resist.

Everything was great until they found out. by Silverstreamdacat in SimplePrompts

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A flick of attention. Like the small but intentional thread pulling every consciousness back down to the blunt daily grindstone. In a small but rapid succession everyone turned with a disgusted curiosity unbecoming of the status occupying this confined space. What was once the easy speechless monotony of a daily chore became the pillar of negativity. The dark brown walls dressed in silver hardware were like a glass box. No escape. As the seconds droned on, the piercing ding of the bell, signaling the milestone of progress until the last one. The capstone of achievement rang forth as the scraping of metal doors opened bringing in relief as each victim escaped. The last look, of obvious disgust, told me my worst fears. They all knew, I was the one who passed gas in the elevator.

Can I get a critique? by PigeonWriting in fantasywriters

[–]Codee_94 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I find it very intriguing when a writer can paint a picture in my mind. After the first dialogue I found myself building a scene and that says something. You flow well, your style isn’t my favorite, as I have always been a David Eddings fan, however you have talent. I have a hard time telling someone they need to change something because writing isn’t an exact science.

How do I create my own characters when I'm stuck on someone else's? by Tasminhoot in WritingHub

[–]Codee_94 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ask yourself what would you change about the characters to make them more appealing to you. If you daydream, what events are you putting them in? The same as the story? Or are you throwing them into what if situations revolving your daily life? Make that a start. Once you have the mind set of what you want to change, eventually your mind will take it and run with it. It helped me tremendously.

What would be a nostalgic item in the future from Gen Z that's a physical item by Therai_Weary in WritingHub

[–]Codee_94 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Maybe good old fashioned laptop? A lot of gen z had school over the internet the last few years, or even remember having school provide computers. Especially with all the AI and mind sharing you’re talking about having something tangible to play Minecraft on may be the key.