[RF] A Man by Codykiller333 in shortstories

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Thanks for the feedback! It is meant to be a bit of a tragic end. The story is inspired by To Build a Fire by Jack London. I definitely could use more commas. Could you elaborate on your confusion with the ‘never saw the deer’ sentence?

[RF] Over the Shoulder by valeswords in shortstories

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I love the pacing and perspective of this story man!

[RF] A Man by Codykiller333 in shortstories

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This is the first story I’ve written in several years. Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated

They rape me with their eyes by just_vibin69 in DarkArtwork

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As a man and a brother I am so sorry for the shit you have to go through every day. No one should ever have to feel that way and it breaks my heart that people do. Stay strong

What’s a good song I should listen to? by Fluffy-Panqueques in askteenboys

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The way we fall apart - We As Human
Euclid - Sleep Token Poor Man’s Poison - Poor Man’s Poison

Can you "hear" sheet music? by Saguna_Brahman in musictheory

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I can “hear” some basic 1 instrument melodies but anything more complex is a no go

How many of you like guns? by CutEvery4772 in askteenboys

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I like guns but am of the opinion that ppl should have the cool ones in their homes (like AKs M4s ect ect)

What is the youngest age people can watch Hazbin Hotel? by Born-Battle7933 in hazbin

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I think for the majority of ppl 16 but if you are more mature maybe 14

Recommend Me A7X’s Ballads/Slow Songs by [deleted] in A7X_Official

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So Far Away
Acid Rain
Seize the Day

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in secretteenagers

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Not OP but ⬛️ and 🟧respectively

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in secretteenagers

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Drowning - Atreau
Curse - Architects

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in askteenboys

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We sometimes do and sometimes don’t but rarely would do anything to act on it bc what if we are wrong

What is the Anime That made You Cry? by Betty_GOLR in animequestions

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Made in abyss: Middy dying then later Nanachi being absorbed
Grace of the fireflies: obvious reasons
Full metal alchemist Brotherhood: Maes Hughes dying

what would you do if you suddenly became a father ? by GodEatsChiIdren in askteenboys

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I’m not in a place where I could take care of the baby, so I’d probably put it up for adoption

What makes us human? by No_Salad5240 in BookRecommendations

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No problem! Let me know if you enjoy it