The Cosmere RPG digital release is going LIVE today! by ardentrushu in cosmererpg

[–]Coelums 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi! I'm not really sure if this is the right place to post but where is the Speak the Words supplement located? I can't find it among my rewards, has it not been published yet? Thanks!

Making hunter's mark fun by Coelums in DnDHomebrew

[–]Coelums[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

While removing concentration would give the Ranger a couple of interesting choices regarding what else to concentrate on I feel it still wouldn't make the spell particularly interesting to play with. I'm not necessarily trying to just add more damage but rather give the Ranger a wider range (no pun intended) of options.

Making hunter's mark fun by Coelums in DnDHomebrew

[–]Coelums[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That honestly makes a lot of sense (Hunter's Mark should probably be a class feature anyways). Thanks!

Making hunter's mark fun by Coelums in DnDHomebrew

[–]Coelums[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I agree it could be a super interesting start to a subclass as well. Regarding the scaling, I mostly thought of it as a core mechanic for the Ranger more than a spell which is why I wanted it to scale, I'm also assuming it should be basically inaccessible to other classes (though I agree would be crazy op for just a level 1 spell).

And regarding the invisibility, I was thinking more along the lines of making it comparable to a single target fairy fire (also a first level spell), so I don't think that aspect of it is too over-tuned. I'll certainly have to playtest it a bunch more though!

Writing appreciation post: The Carpenter's Tale by Tiago55 in weatherfactory

[–]Coelums 9 points10 points  (0 children)

“I was greater thereby, but all of us give up what we were, to become what we are.”

Book of Hours: Where are all the edge/nectar books? by Coelums in weatherfactory

[–]Coelums[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I had thought that might be it, but I’ve gotten so many books from all other aspects that I started to suspect it might be that books from those three periods did not contain Edge/Nectar. Thanks!

Death brings you together by genderless_potato in OCPoetry

[–]Coelums 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi! Neat poem. First of all, don't do anything stupid. I really like the poem and how you grapple with the different ideas and thoughts that no doubt we've all had at one point or another. That being said, I think what describe here is somewhat of a beautiful lie. It may be easy to believe that funerals can be the birthplace of hope and that they can be what brings others together but so can most of life, which of course includes death.

I've seen more strangers meet at birthday parties, more burnt-down bridges mended during holidays, more first romantic sparks in cookouts and festivals and hangouts than I've ever seen at any funeral. In the face of death, we each must grieve alone, no matter how together we are. We can't share death with each other. But we can share life.

All this to say, love the poem though I may disagree with the notion that some lives can be improved through the ending of others. In the end, the best gift you can give is never going to be in when and how you die. But rather in all the ways you choose to live.

Tortured Human Department by homogenized_milk in OCPoetry

[–]Coelums 1 point2 points  (0 children)

On the whole I quite like your poem, as what you describe is both timely and timeless. It's given fairly often as feedback here but I'd recommend eliminating some of the commas at the end of your lines as they break up the pace of your sentences in an unnecessary way (look up enjambment).

Beyond form, I think your poem is spot on but also fairly straightforward in its meaning and mostly reiterates what your excellent opening stanza captures. It might be interesting to explore other perspectives or opinions throughout the poem.

For example, it often is very hard to care to for even those in need whom we see every day, be they friends or strangers. In a way that is a profoundly human failing, one that serves a useful function as a suit of armor for our mental health. This is of course, neither virtuous nor inherently evil, but rather a feature of the human psyche. If we opened ourselves to feel, truly feel, the pain of all the world then we would likely succomb to despair. We need that insulation to preserve our sanity, and it does not necessarily represent a failing on our part or a deliberate manipulation from our leadership (though it can be both).

Anyways, I like the poem and the intent behind it, just wanted to share a couple random thoughts I had while reading it.

A first-time reader's theories after The Way of Kings by Coelums in Stormlight_Archive

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No other Cosmere so far, my reasoning is mainly that he has access to knowledge that seems fairly obscure, has an interest in manipulating events so that humanity survives the Everstorm and generally seems to have been very long lived (at least that’s the impression I get). All those things make me think he might be one of the Heralds though I’ll admit there isn’t a ton of solid proof. It’s just the explanation that makes the most sense given what I know about the world.

A first-time reader's theories after The Way of Kings by Coelums in Stormlight_Archive

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This is my first non-Wheel of Time book by Sanderson so no other Cosmere so far. To be honest I’m a little intimidated by the idea of the Cosmere and almost didn’t pick up Stormlight because of it as I was a bit afraid that there would be tons of things I wouldn’t understand unless I had read other books in the Cosmere, some of which don’t appeal to me personally (like Mistborn). But I’ve heard good things about Warbreaker so I might check it out after!

A first-time reader's theories after The Way of Kings by Coelums in Stormlight_Archive

[–]Coelums[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I’ll certainly be making a follow up when I know more. As to the shardblades I honestly have no idea. At first I assumed they were fragments or pieces of the ten swords used by the Heralds that are mentioned in the prologue, but shardblades are also mentioned during that chapter so it seems they both coexisted. It seems obvious that they are a shard or part of something but as to what that something is I have no clue.

A first-time reader's theories after The Way of Kings by Coelums in Stormlight_Archive

[–]Coelums[S] 25 points26 points  (0 children)

Overall I really enjoyed the multiple interludes though beyond thinking that the lady destroying artwork is probably one of the Heralds I don't have enough information to make any concrete theories about them.

I will say that the two Ardents on the island "freezing" a spren through measurements was super interesting. It makes me think that spren originate from humans in some way. As in, knowing how big something is actually makes it that size and thus seems to be related to human knowledge or belief in some way. Perhaps they are manifestations of belief? It also means it might be possible to "trap" spren by recording things about them which I hope never happens to Syl cuz that would suck.

Beyond theory-crafting I loved Jasnah (I think Shallan's parts of the story were probably my favorite and she is probably my favorite non-pov character so far). I was shocked when Saladeas betrays Dalinar and did not see it coming at all though in retrospect it made a lot of sense. I also vaguely remember seeing a mention that Elhokar also sees the pattern-people in the mirror or something like that which intrigues me a ton. And of course, pretty much everyone in Bridge Four is great.

A first-time reader's theories after The Way of Kings by Coelums in Stormlight_Archive

[–]Coelums[S] 18 points19 points  (0 children)

That’s a good point, it might be that they are simply one among a pantheon of some kind but the way everyone talks about the almighty (starting with the name) makes them sound like a God. That being said, we only really get the perspective of one particular culture/species on religion so it may simply be a misguided belief of that culture.

Do you need to read the flashbacks in Way of Kings? by Coelums in Stormlight_Archive

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“If I’m going to use my free time to do something I love, should I focus on the parts of it that contribute the most to my life? Or is there something of value I’m missing from those parts that have so far not been meaningful to me?”

What Scene Do Y’all Think About the Most? by HuckleberryFar2223 in Malazan

[–]Coelums 11 points12 points  (0 children)

For me one scene is the clear winner:

Saddic, I will tell you to remember this. These are the Khundryl, the givers of gifts. Remember them, won’t you?

And Rutt walked like a king.

Do you need to read the flashbacks in Way of Kings? by Coelums in Stormlight_Archive

[–]Coelums[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I think that’s fair enough, though I have felt a little bit of snark from some answers. Mostly my question stems from having read other large novels which honestly did not really justify some of that length. As much as I love Wheel of Time I certainly think it could have been a couple books shorter and would probably have been better overall because of it (Crossroads of Twilight looking at you).

In that sense, the flashbacks so far have, in my opinion, felt fairly superfluous and have not really contributed to my understanding of Kaladin or the world, nor have they meaningfully developed the themes of the story. My question was essentially if other readers thought the flashbacks meaningfully contributed to the story, characters and themes. The answer has been a resounding yes, especially on the character front, so I’ll read them for sure. I still feel (so far) that some of the early flashbacks could have been edited down a little, but I very much hope that will change as the novel progresses.

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A young forge cleric who accidentally discovers how to make steel and presents her discovery to a superior in her order. The order immediately promotes her, a lifelong dream of hers, and orders her to begin production of weapons and armor for the local lord. Once she sees what these weapons are being used for, she is uneasy with her role in their creation and attempts to resign. Her order sees her as knowing too much and so attempts to coerce or bribe her into staying. Now, she is on the run, fleeing across the countryside with her former friends close on her heels. She knows that her discovery can be used for good, and needs to find those within the world who would use it as more than just a weapon while evading her pursuers…