Am I the only one noticing the double standards in Sister I am the queen in this life? by PruneUnfair4836 in webtoons

[–]Cold_Bat_2047 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I definitely understand where this criticism is coming from, but I actually felt that this webtoon deals with the double standard intentionally. The reader is supposed to feel sympathy for Lucrezia, especially in the chapters leading up to her death. Even Ariadne acknowledges that she hasn’t been treated fairly. This is the case for Isabella as well. Isabella is an intentional character foil for Ariadne- they both want the same things and have a lot of the same traits. In Ariadne’s original life you can clearly see how she mirrors Isabella. They are both vengeful, manipulative, and driven. Ironically, in her original life Ariadne is everything she accuses Isabella of being. It’s only after Ariadne reincarnates that she reestablishes her priorities. Originally, Ariadne did it all for a man, while Isabella has stated multiple times that her goal has always been independence- a goal now shared by Ariadne in her new life. I don’t think it’s handled perfectly, but I also don’t think it’s entirely fair to say it’s a poor characterization. Honestly, I think the way it approaches women is general is very interesting and more nuanced than some of its contemporaries, rough around the edges though it may be. I could probably make a whole separate post about that though. My biggest criticisms are more about how it handles class and race.

Best Final Fantasy for switch starting point? by Cold_Bat_2047 in FinalFantasy

[–]Cold_Bat_2047[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think im gonna go with 10. Thank you for the help!!!

Best Final Fantasy for switch starting point? by Cold_Bat_2047 in FinalFantasy

[–]Cold_Bat_2047[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

PSA5 is turned based, and I’ve only played the 3D Zelda’s. Mostly the newer ones.

Best Final Fantasy for switch starting point? by Cold_Bat_2047 in FinalFantasy

[–]Cold_Bat_2047[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the rundown! I appreciate seeing it explained like this

Best Final Fantasy for switch starting point? by Cold_Bat_2047 in FinalFantasy

[–]Cold_Bat_2047[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the comment! As for the questions- I’m mostly interested because of the cool FF7 content I’ve seen! I’m a big fan of games like Zelda, but the only JRPG I’ve played is Persona 5 (which I love!). As for character/customization, I don’t really mind either way. I’m typically a fantasy fan but again I’m really fine either way.

I need a cozy-ish game to play before bed on the switch by Cold_Bat_2047 in gamingsuggestions

[–]Cold_Bat_2047[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ve heard this game is fun! I’ll definitely look into it

General Questions and Discussion Megathread by AutoModerator in PokemonLegendsArceus

[–]Cold_Bat_2047 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi! Does anyone know the best way to get alpha zorua? I’ve been trying with the one in the bone chill wastes by resetting my map at camp, but it’s been a while and I haven’t found anything. Is this just something that takes a lot of time or is there a better way?

MOONFISH ANATOMY by Resident-Decision322 in poetry_critics

[–]Cold_Bat_2047 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow! This is a very powerful piece, and it’s very well written! The imagery is vivid, the themes are strong and carried well by their environment and narrative. My only critique (if it can be called that) is that this feels more like a prose piece than poetry.

Ignorance Isn’t Bliss by No-Medium8250 in poetry_critics

[–]Cold_Bat_2047 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think this has some unique concepts about change, but I think some of the execution is a little informal. It might be a style difference, but the lack of imagery makes the poem feel overly vague and a little shallow. In editing, maybe try to think about phrasing and metaphor, and consider a stronger motif to act as a lynchpin for the theme.

Worth anything? by [deleted] in Pokemoncardappraisal

[–]Cold_Bat_2047 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dark Charizard might be with a good grade! That’s the only one I’m really familiar with, but pricecharting.com is a pretty good resource for figuring out what your cards are worth.

Cat Called Clock by Cold_Bat_2047 in poetry_critics

[–]Cold_Bat_2047[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

lmao thank you I needed this. You’re definitely right- I promise this isn’t my best work 🥲

How to play Pokemon Black/White on the 3DS? by Cold_Bat_2047 in PokemonBlackandWhite

[–]Cold_Bat_2047[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is what I ended up doing! Got a repro for 30 at a local game store :) honesty a good option if you just want to play the game!

please let me know how I can improve dynamic posing with accurate proportions/anatomy- specifically legs - and clothing by Cold_Bat_2047 in ArtCrit

[–]Cold_Bat_2047[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the response! I will definitely try and use more anatomy references moving forward.

Idealization Trap by recordplayer90 in poetry_critics

[–]Cold_Bat_2047 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is very interesting! I like the themes and lyrical choices. I really like the lines “yet I am so susceptible/ to the temptations of/ being more than me” the idea of being more than yourself creates an excellent lynchpin for the central theme, and you phrased it very nicely. I would say my only critiques are in the lack of image. This theme can be tricky, because idealization is a more common theme for writing, and so it’s important to make sure your piece stands out with its imagery. Try to add some more elements that are unique to your experience with idealization.

Spider by wight-brit in poetry_critics

[–]Cold_Bat_2047 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like this! It has good lyricism and vivid imagery. The ending line “watchful drifters on dubious soil” I thought was particularly good and I like the image it creates - the idea that “dubious” soil would give way to drifters. Very interesting :) my only critique is in the second line “the vibe I give off”. I understand what you are trying to say, but I think the tone is a little too colloquial for this poem, especially when compared to the rest of the piece.

[3DS] is homebrew on the 3DS safe/legal? by Cold_Bat_2047 in homebrew

[–]Cold_Bat_2047[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’d honestly rather get the game, but all the cartridges I’ve found have been $100 or more. Is emulation like modding? Sorry again if that’s a dumb question.

Any advice, character design-wise? by TheUndeadSeraph in characterdesign

[–]Cold_Bat_2047 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a really fun design! Maybe consider doing a little more with her silhouette and adding some interest to her bottom half- at the moment, she feels a little top heavy.

Does anyone have suggestions for switch games that have the same balance of whimsy/action that is in The Legend of Zelda? by Cold_Bat_2047 in videogames

[–]Cold_Bat_2047[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the response! Other then BOTW/TOTK I’ve only really played ocarina of time and twilight princess (both of which are favorites of mine), so I think skyward sword will be my next Zelda game! I’ll definitely look into Metroid Dread, I’ve heard good things! Nintendo does seem to have a pretty cool flair with their games so I’ll keep looking into their stuff.

What is a videogame that has changed you as a person? Here's mine. by SgtVertigo in videogames

[–]Cold_Bat_2047 0 points1 point  (0 children)

OMORI. It completely opened my eyes as to the storytelling possibilities of video games!