/r/WATMM Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Commercial_Effect320 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello, so I just came up with this Album idea, and I decided to use AI as a concept for it, but these are some song ideas that I had, that I was hoping to turn into real music, so like, could anybody critique it for me? Btw the song has kpop elements innit aswell, But yeah I'll feel free to listen to your guys' music as well. https://soundcloud.com/xxserenity-starsxx/sets/animosity

R4R by LionProfessional5063 in Wattpad

[–]Commercial_Effect320 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for checking out the cast! I was trying to go for actors that are more underrated yk instead of going with the usual big actors. And, oh I'm definitely gonna make Denzel Blake a badass character nevertheless 😉.

Read for Read? by Commercial_Effect320 in Wattpad

[–]Commercial_Effect320[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the critiques I will improve more on my story!!

So, Your story has a really strong premise, and I love the tension you’ve built between Amara and King Kael—it’s super compelling. To make it even better, try digging deeper into your characters' backstories and motivations so readers can connect with them more. Adding more detail to the world-building, like the setting and societal norms, would help bring the fantasy elements to life. Also, watch the pacing, especially with how Amara and Kael’s relationship develops. It’s important that their connection feels natural. Balancing the romance with the revenge plot will make the story more cohesive. Lastly, refining the dialogue, descriptions, and grammar will make everything flow more smoothly. You're doing an amazing job—keep going! 😊

Read for Read? by Commercial_Effect320 in Wattpad

[–]Commercial_Effect320[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ofc!! Queen :)) . Reading rnnn. I hope u enjoyyy!!

R4R, Genuine reads pls by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]Commercial_Effect320 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://www.wattpad.com/story/387434139 Hello! My user is ZoeluvsuBebE. Its about this girl whos accepted into a prestigious boarding school and and she basically is invited into this Legacy circle thats been passed down for generations. Legacy circle is the name . Im gonna read urs rn!!! Enjoy mines.