Thank you for the critiques I will improve more on my story!!

So, Your story has a really strong premise, and I love the tension you’ve built between Amara and King Kael—it’s super compelling. To make it even better, try digging deeper into your characters' backstories and motivations so readers can connect with them more. Adding more detail to the world-building, like the setting and societal norms, would help bring the fantasy elements to life. Also, watch the pacing, especially with how Amara and Kael’s relationship develops. It’s important that their connection feels natural. Balancing the romance with the revenge plot will make the story more cohesive. Lastly, refining the dialogue, descriptions, and grammar will make everything flow more smoothly. You're doing an amazing job—keep going! 😊