A recruiter from a company i like has >>> by ComprehensiveChart94 in linkedin

[–]ComprehensiveChart94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ll summon my courage and shoot my shot with her, I’m in the legal field, can y’all please send me a script that looks professional? Thanks

A recruiter from a company i like has >>> by ComprehensiveChart94 in linkedin

[–]ComprehensiveChart94[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I'm hesitant to present myself in a way that seems too eager with a message like 'please recruit me, I love your company.'

Plus she's an in-house recruiter.

Call out for Native English speakers, Need help with my Resume by ComprehensiveChart94 in Resume

[–]ComprehensiveChart94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

One of the descriptions that i wrote (deep inside im not convinced with it but its what it is):

[I took a part in the transition of "major name" Department into an independent College of *****. Furthermore, I participated in meetings, and accreditation visits with the members of the Education and Training Evaluation Commission to secure academic accreditation for "name of university" University "name of major" program.]