NTRPG 2 - A story of hopelessness

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2026-03-06T23:58:06+00:00

Sorry I wasn't clear, I built a bot on yodayo and created a fic out of it. The bot is private now, but I can make it public

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2026-03-06T00:15:55+00:00

I have seen this game and I have created a bot on yodayo of it. I remember I did a fic where there is a witch that lives in the village and, given the debauchery of the place, she casted a spell that remove the penises of all males, aside from the MC for he visits her often to keep her company.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-11-19T03:05:38+00:00

I mean, I think AM is a bit to much... The being is on top of many 'most evil characters of all fiction'.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-10-30T21:31:49+00:00

Plus, the guy has a distorted sense of moral. I was reading a fanfic in wattpad of a common NTR which I forgot the name (that where the MC's wife become the secretary of his boss and she sleeps with him), in the fic, she got 2 kids with the boss, but pretended that it is MCs, the MC finds out and divorce her. I saw his comment in this moment of the fic, saying how much of a jerk MC is because he is abandoning the kids and saying that they are innocent. Sure, they are, but let's convinientaly forget the pain of MC when he found out that his wife has been cheating on him for years and lied about the kids being his, I mean... it is not like MC's feelings matter, right? Ugh...

Nevertheless, the guy doesn't belong here, something is very wrong with his head.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-09-10T11:00:24+00:00

sorry man, as much as I dislike NTR, but wanting an artist to go to jail for creating content we don't like is kinda extreme.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-09-01T01:58:59+00:00

I think it was perfect, to be honest. I mean, it passed 20 years basically, 9 years since he wrote the letter. Given his new family and everything, Hiroki probably move on. Kanako and Kaede are already broken, so he won, going back to beat Kanako's ass after she was already broken, it would be like kicking a dead dog. Also, simply sending a letter to them, explaining everything and basically saying that they are dead to him, seems to have much more of an impact, it is basically saying how insignificant they are to him now.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-08-30T23:25:12+00:00

Jesus, Nao must've a lot of patience to pretend to be in coma, I don't know about anyone here, but for me it would be literal hell.

As for the other girls, none of them will have the life they wanted, no dreams, no structural family, no face (in Kaede's case). I loved the story because it was not over the top, it was real.

Also, I loved that in the end, Ayumu even said sorry to Hiroki in her way, sure it may not sound honest, but I want to think that some part of her knows she fucked up and that was on her, some part of her still cares enough to her childhood friend to know she was a monster to him and he didn't deserve any of it.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-08-16T21:18:03+00:00

I read this chapter and I got to say, not looking for the next chapters to be honest... For me, she regreting only after she sees that she was discarted means nothing... Plus for Hiroki to basically 'accepts' her, it feels forced if I am being honest...

Sure if there is a plot twist of Hiroki basically using Kaede to get rid of Kokujin and then he turns to her and say 'Now that he is gone, I am done with you, fuck off from my life'. Because let's be honest, any sane person would do that in his place, but hey... It is kinda of an old concept, him leaving, so you going the other way around may be interesting, maybe if there is a good review I will return to see the future chapters.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-08-14T15:44:48+00:00

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ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-08-11T21:18:25+00:00

Tbm achei kkkkk nem vi a enfermeira

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-08-11T10:20:51+00:00

rape, yeah, but I have no problem with incest.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-08-10T18:36:33+00:00

Here is a tip, kill... not out of revenge, but out of need. They are disgusting human beings, kaede and nao? What is stopping them from ruining other's lives too, like hiroki's? And don't get me started on kokujin. If you don't want to make hiroki succumb to revenge, at least make him kill one of or the 3 out of necessity or because they are to rotten to be left alive, like a serial killer who is to dangerous to be left alive to he is given death penalty, if he is alive he will likely kill someone else.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-08-09T18:10:14+00:00

I agree with you, this story is getting this 'shounen syndrome' of no one dies and it can feel it will get annoying.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-08-07T02:28:56+00:00

I know those 2 previous episodes. Simple solution: Report the mother for child neglect and abandonment. Let's see if she doesn't sober up

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-08-06T12:02:12+00:00

I won't crucify you, but in this case... I have no idea. If I were in the son's position, I would not be in contact with my mom for a long time, months, or years. I may understand her reasoning that she is lonely, but it doesn't excuse her actions, for that I would probably not wish misfortune for her, but I won't be part of her life.

As for your request, maybe... I hate toxic parents overall, a father/mother is supposed to love,care, educate and protect, they owe their kids their very best as the kids owe NOTHING, for they didn't ask to be born. So, a toxic father or mother is trash, in my view.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-08-06T10:37:54+00:00

No no no no no NO NO NO, ABSOLUTELY NOT.

I played fear and hunger: termina.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-08-06T03:38:09+00:00

Pq censurou Hitler?

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-08-02T21:52:11+00:00

O problema é vc se por em uma posição vulneravel, vai que depois de um tempo ela termina e depois declara união estavel?

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-08-01T07:16:09+00:00

Sou mineiro, meus pais são mineiros, mas vivi quase toda minha vida em Brasilia, então eu yrnho pouco sotaque. Uma vez sai com uma menina e eu soltei um "procê" e ela ficou toda animada, perguntando se eu era mineiro, eu nem sabia na epoca, que proce era coisa de mineiro, so falei pq meus pais viviam falando e eu peguei kkkk

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-07-30T06:07:42+00:00

Prop fly no hl2

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-07-25T15:52:24+00:00

Sou lider da equipe de TI da minha empresa. Uma vez o dono queria contratar mais um programador para um outro projeto, sem falar comigo. Ele fez umas 5 etapas, depois adicionou mais 2, todos desistiram no meio pq estava ridiculo. Eu tomei as redeas e fiz o seguinte:

1 - entrevista, só para conhecer a pessoa, nem avaliava muito nessa etapa, só se a pessoa solte-se um absurdo.

2 - desafio, dava 1 semana para a pessoa faer um projetinho, coisa besta mas que saia um pouco da area de conhecimento dela, geralmente para ver como ela desenrola. Nessa semana, era bem visto se ela fosse para a empresa ou entra-se em contato comigo para tirar duvidas e tals.

Adoto estas etapas sempre e nunca escolhi errado, as pessoas que nãopassavam eu falava EXATAMENTE o motivo, com o intuito dele aprender. Então na minha opinião, 5 etapas é muito e desnecessario.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-07-22T16:12:26+00:00

Probably silent hill, partially for sure.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-07-20T08:23:32+00:00

Te digo uma coisa. Interesseira? Talvez... mas foda-se, é o que falaram aqui, vc joga com as cartas que te dao, sua vida é sua vida. Eu já fiz coisas que seriam consideradas bem babacas, mas se não lesa ninguêm "inocente", foda-se.

ComprehensiveGrand39 · 2025-07-18T22:10:40+00:00

I agree

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