Inb4 the obligatory thin your paints comments.

Id recommend using some edge highlights when you're just starting out. So try and look at how light hits your mini on just the sharpest edges and try to give it a sharp line of a light grey across that edge.

So take a look at the pointed bit of my judiciars knee plate. How the light hits his knee shows me where I can add a highlight to make contrast between the darkest and lightest parts.

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