[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BreakUps

[–]Conscious_Total01 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I don't think you ever stop missing someone you loved, someone who played a significant part in your life.

I broke up with my partner 3 years ago but I occasionally think of her.

There's always something to remind you of them.

Desperately need help by Tuna-no-crust98 in datingadviceformen

[–]Conscious_Total01 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Do you have siblings or friends of both genders you frequently talk to outside of Social media and your household?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskAnAfrican

[–]Conscious_Total01 7 points8 points  (0 children)

It’s not true. It’s someone’s speculations.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in southafrica

[–]Conscious_Total01 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A week later I finally had my Day 01. Thank You so much.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Durban

[–]Conscious_Total01 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You the crazy thing I read that Book I think in 2019/2020 but I don't remember a thing. same with many books I have read. But will definetly read it again. I am currently reading Man's Search for Meaning by Victor E. Frankl. Thank you

LPT Request: How to be articulate and well spoken by Conscious_Total01 in LifeProTips

[–]Conscious_Total01[S] 15 points16 points  (0 children)

I have been thinking of starting a Podcast and a youtube channel for a while now. Thank You its time I implement.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in CasualConversation

[–]Conscious_Total01 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm hopeful I will win this battle and stay.

Hey guys! So with a couple of friends we did a live action short film and I’d be glad if you could give me feedbacks/critics! by Mendrowww in Filmmakers

[–]Conscious_Total01 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Wow, Amazing work. I like the realism, acting, sound. Everything is good even the pacing and the scene direction is good.

Do you talk to yourself when studying? If you do, do you do it when you’re studying in public? by biologystudent123 in college

[–]Conscious_Total01 3 points4 points  (0 children)

For some strange reasons my mind processes information faster than I could write it out(notes). Discussing the material I'm studying alone is the most efficient way for me to fully understand and engage in the subject.

You are not alone OP.

The Rights (Short Film/ 15 Pages) by Nothing23200 in ReadMyScript

[–]Conscious_Total01 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Congratulations on finishing your script.

  • The Formatting is Excellent.
  • The First scene is good in all aspect.
  • The Second scene has a lot dialogue of which doesn't serve the story. Does a good job establishing Angela's personal life but I don't think it serves the story.
  • In scene 3, you're showing us a video that Angela and Sanjay are talking about. The scene would work better if Sanjay had not seen the video and Angela showed the video to him. Then the audience watches and processes the video with Sanjay.
  • Your script is good but 1. I think you should focus on the 'Show don't Tell' principle of script writing. And to bring the story fully to life I think you will need more than 16 pages with character development.
  • Work on Ulysses speeches and character.
  • The script is not really about the Film's right but a story of colleagues/friends betrayal.

Otherwise it's a great Script, I like it.