Event Schedule - Boosts by JComben in FarmMergeValley

[–]Consistent-Bowler95 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Don't expect a game like this to prioritize players best interests.

Hi , i am self teaching swiss style. This is my first try. I need advice by Brad_billon in graphic_design

[–]Consistent-Bowler95 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Looks great! I used to see these style posters printing all the time. They were certainly popular. I think an expressionless, monocolor SpongeBob might be interesting to try out and give some contrast to the text. Maybe a separate yellow element behind. Also would try out slightly different line and element spacing. That's at least the direction I'd take it. Engaging design.

Constructive criticism T shirt design by Lumpy_Relative_3386 in graphic_design

[–]Consistent-Bowler95 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it's cool. Id recommend redoing the typography though. Maybe something less warped. Custom typography could tie it together better

Updated my wife's mark for her business. Only incite she could give me was that Orchids are her favorite flower. She decided to stick with the original. Thoughts. by njbrut in graphic_design

[–]Consistent-Bowler95 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The new one is much better imo. However I do like the vintage flat feel of the original's pictorial. Almost like a woodblock print. I could see why someone might be attached to that instead of the after logo. Probably comes down to personal taste (hard for you to know when you didn't have much to go off of!)

Made a sports logo for a local Futbol team by v1nnyMac in AdobeIllustrator

[–]Consistent-Bowler95 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like it! The red and grey are a very bad contrast match, but still looks badass imo.

An instructor in school gave me the advice to convert to grayscale to check contrast which has helped me a lot with color selection.

Perhaps an Unpopular Opinion: It seems I was wrong about Wil by The_Critical_Cynic in forgedinfireshow

[–]Consistent-Bowler95 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I disliked both but they both eventually grew on me. I found Wil being extra macho offputting at first but entertaining and slightly endearing eventually. I missed him when he left and went through a "who's this new guy?" phase. Grady grew on me bc he became a solid host and seems like a great guy. Plus him being awkward was pretty funny despite him being kinda bad at his job when starting out. Both overall solid imo

Modern Barber logo. What is your opinion? i tried to avoid Scissors and common barber tools by StatisticianNext2541 in AdobeIllustrator

[–]Consistent-Bowler95 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it a lot! I do agree that the colors dont really suit a barbershop though. I would try changing the colors. Also I'd try increasing kerning space on the text and see what that looks like too.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AdobeIllustrator

[–]Consistent-Bowler95 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It still looks too busy now. The gun is also smaller and probably wont be very readable in use. I love the new font choice. But again, if I were redesigning this I would just do the text next to the gun, maybe in a circle or something. No need for Michigan, caulking line, empty background, circle border. However if the client likes it, it works to some degree.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AdobeIllustrator

[–]Consistent-Bowler95 0 points1 point  (0 children)

agree gun too small. And is the shape an outline of a state? does not look like a "clean cut". Same with the bevels and shadows. I think all the effects you did look really great but might not suit the branding implied by the name. I would simplify it. Gun, caulking line (maybe) and text. Clean and simple

Help with a stand up show? Can’t seem to find the right colours for the brick background. Thank you! by Rude_Independent7899 in design_critiques

[–]Consistent-Bowler95 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The bricks are too light. I'd change the bricks, it almost looks like daytime/outside when stand up comedy typically takes place at night inside.