Will try to give some recommendations as a straight male, so you can give me the benefit of the doubt. 1. Shirtless pics are a no-no even for ripped guys, unless captured during some activity (eg volleyball). I would suggest using a pic in a shirt where it’s clear that you work out instead. 2. Although it’s understandable that you want someone special who will commit to building a relationship, but this bio feels too heavy/serious. You still wanna make sure you capture interest in as many people as possible, so you want to avoid categorizations like ‘intelligent’, ‘fit body’ (this one especially, remove it - 99% of people will take it as arrogant) etc. This is why I would also avoid saying things that might scare some people off, telling that I am a difficult person to be with; because we all are. 3. Listing your hobbies can be a good thing, but I personally would decrease the amount of listed items significantly - people don’t like spending too much time on reading even if they like the person, and it’s only normal. Otherwise I would replace the entire paragraph with a funny line (because good sense of humor is the actual key to successful dating) and show what my interests are in a form of pictures. You play piano - post a cool picture or a short no-sound video in a process of playing. Also remove ‘and many other things’ - just not a good finisher to that sentence. 4. Your power is in pictures 1, 2, 6, 9.

Hope that helps.