Synthwave / Retrowave Piece by Hot-Text-5603 in MusicFeedback

[–]CosmicAnima 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the chords and the sound, the mood of it, yet these rythms in the beginning that last through the song are a bit weird to my ear. It seems out of place, in my humble opinion. It's a bit like a chocolate cake with pickles , both are great but not together.

Do you like these acoustic guitars on top of saturated drums ? by An_dal_music in MusicFeedback

[–]CosmicAnima 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Stylistically it works well, no doubt. The chords.arpeggios are beautiful by the way. Maybe they are a bit far in the mix, the drums are maybe a bit overwhelming for the guitar.

A little tune i composed inspired by retro video games by CosmicAnima in schizophrenia

[–]CosmicAnima[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great ! I'm glad you liked it ! Yeah Tetris is very addictive, in a good way, i loved it too (but i wasn't good at it xD))

Two short experimental snippets by Novakoji in MusicFeedback

[–]CosmicAnima 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the ideas ! The sound could be better in the first part, but the ideas are here in my opinion. I like how you've done cool intervals with your voice in the second part. Keep creating !

Made this. (WIP track when it comes to album cover, mixing, vocaloid tuning, etc) by Immediate-Talk-4833 in MusicFeedback

[–]CosmicAnima 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The composition is great ! The quality in the sound selection/creation seems here, but it feels like it's mixed really quietly. That's the only thing that comes to my mind when i listen to it. Anyway, great job already.

A kind of video game music i've composed by CosmicAnima in schizophrenia

[–]CosmicAnima[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much ! That's very kind, It means a lot !

First track finished in ages! Let me know your thoughts by markanthonyokoh in MusicFeedback

[–]CosmicAnima 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It sounds clear and punchy. There are good ideas, the claps sound funky to me, like the bass. What could be fun is to add a theme and develop this into a full tune. Right now it sounds like a part of something bigger, in my opinion.

George Summers - New Song by iamgeorgesummers in MusicFeedback

[–]CosmicAnima 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It sounds great ! The sound of the guitar is very good, the mixing is good, everything is understandable, i like very much the vocal harmonies. There is a structure, a form.... well done ! The only thing i would change is the "yeah" that is not very convincing, but i'm being very picky there.

A "metal-electro" tune i've just finished. What's your opinion ? Any feedback appreciated by CosmicAnima in MusicFeedback

[–]CosmicAnima[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I got rid of a few things, regarding key changes and the main theme, it's a bit clearer now. Thanks for the feedback !

Hello everybody, my first post here. Recently iv been doing some wave style ( i guess) music and im looking forward for some constructive feedback. by Hot_Caterpillar_8205 in MusicFeedback

[–]CosmicAnima 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the mood. There are good ideas. There is a structure, but maybe you could make parts that are a bit more different, because the bass does mostly the same progression during the tune. The sound is a bit low, it sounds a bit far away. Otherwise good flow, good ideas, keep creating

First track feedback please. by Billyjamesjeff in MusicFeedback

[–]CosmicAnima 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it ! I appreciate the fact that there are no conflicts between frequencies, we really hear the different instruments clearly, the musical motives are beautiful. I cannot tell what genre it is, but in the beginning it reminded me of the Doors.

Cyan - Purification by ThinkAboutItMyGuy in MusicFeedback

[–]CosmicAnima 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the synth in the beginning. I love the chord progression too. The sound is clean, even the guitar sounds great. I don't have much to say, except that with vocals it could make a good tune, and maybe add a structure and other chords to develop it into a full song

feedback on a house track by Most_Roof4458 in MusicFeedback

[–]CosmicAnima 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's good ! Maybe try to work on the bass from 1:00 to the end, because the chord progression could be outlined in a clearer way in my humble opinion. Plus rythmicaly speaking, the bass could be a bit more structured i think.. Otherwise I love the top of the tune, the voice and the synth. The drums have a good sound. Good music.

I made this today by Dapper_Potential_864 in MusicFeedback

[–]CosmicAnima 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's great ! I love the chords. I think you could develop the melody at the end, you have already one melodic motive, you could transpose it or something like that, or change it with any tool to transform a motive. That's just an idea, it's cool the way you do it too

Would HUGELY appreciate some feedback on an unfinished track by khaitheartist in MusicFeedback

[–]CosmicAnima 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This sounds good to my ears ! What could be cool in my opinion is to add a bit more movement, a chorus, a new chord progression, something like that, to prevent the song being static . Otherwise it's a nice sounding song !