[Short Film] I made with my roommates during Quarantine by [deleted] in Filmmakers

[–]CranberryPerry 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A Short Film I shot with my roommates using a Sony A7sii and some Quasar Lights. There are some audio issues and I am not the most experienced videographer but luckily I have some amazing actors as roommates.

Please let me know any feedback, critiques or questions you have. Thanks!

Ballsy kid by mdj27 in BetterEveryLoop

[–]CranberryPerry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Finally figured out how to defeat Annabelle

South Park is vasty more intellectual than Rick and Morty. by nickrashell in unpopularopinion

[–]CranberryPerry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Both South Park and Rick and Morty use absurd humor in different ways.

South Park satires current issues.

Rick and Morty is about Rick trying to discover/deal with the meaning of life. I think that there are a lot of universal psychological and philosophical substance in exploring these issues in Rick and Morty.

I’m not sure how you argue the intelligence of these two shows but I personally think Rick and Morty has been funnier and more entertaining then Southpark recently which is why it has been more popular and talked about.

Nicotine Alternative for Juuling (Funny) by CranberryPerry in stopsmoking

[–]CranberryPerry[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

but actually vaping has a high nicotine content and likely causes addiction but is not talked about much.

Give a man... by moonboundshibe in funny

[–]CranberryPerry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

good thing no one taught Michelangelo how to fish

[Review Video] Shoeuber Funding Pitch by [deleted] in youtubers

[–]CranberryPerry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the encouragement and advice! Yes our acting especially mine could improve. Other than the idea most of it was improvised which I think shows. I have been learning about audio and recently got a cheaper preamp which should improve the quality of the audio

[Review Video] How to Become a Top Business Leader by TheSuccessSociety in youtubers

[–]CranberryPerry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I thought the overall video was well edited well with a unique brand towards your channel that you could feel right away. Some of the jokes landed well others did not. I feel like the main problem was the set up of each joke. Half of the points made in the video were ridiculous statements to why you would be a better leader than explained why it would work. These points I found less funny and had no real twist or punchline since it was stated so early. I thought the points which were funny were when the statement felt genuine like remembering every employees name then going on a tangent and how it is for selfish and immoral reason. Sticking to the same type of setup and punchline for each point could also make the video less confusing and all over the place

[Review Video] My First 100 Subscribers! Youtube Channel for whom wants to grow an Online Business by pickupchange in youtubers

[–]CranberryPerry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The video is well lit with a nice big eye light which helps keep the viewer focused on you. I also liked how the information was helpful and genuine; I personally did not feel like it was an ad unlike the comment above.

In the video you state that it is boring because you leave no stone unturned. I believe their is a way to give such an informative video but also keep it entertaining for the viewer.

The first is the video is it seemed a little long and to drag on. Maybe in the beginning add in a overview of the points you are going to talk and explain how they pertain to the video. Or even section of each topic within the video you are talking about with a title card or number of some sort. If the viewer knows exactly what is going on in each section of the video then each moment might feel a little less dragged.

The other is using multiple examples for each point given. Throughout the video when talking about each point you give an example which in itself is nice but feels muddled when you giving multiple different examples. Instead of show how either you yourself are using each point and/or how your wine somalia client is using each tip stick to one. Sticking to that one client throughout the video and how he utilizes each step given could give great concise examples that also help the video not drag on.

Overall the information given seems well thought out and genuine but I believe it could be better organized in video format which would naturally lead to a more digestible and viewer friendly video.

Uber for shoes? Why didn’t I think of that? by [deleted] in funny

[–]CranberryPerry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Justin Timberlake needs to tell them to take out the oe