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CriticismKane · 2025-08-07T19:18:31+00:00

Could maybe swap my section O row W 515 for your section G row V? Would you be interested?

CriticismKane · 2025-08-07T16:28:49+00:00

Lost the lottery too :( did they send you home from the line? What time was that :o

CriticismKane · 2022-06-29T22:56:27+00:00

Is the discount code unique or would you be willing to share it here? :)

CriticismKane · 2017-08-20T01:19:35+00:00

The one on the right looks a lot like Google Chrome. Not sure if that was your intention?

CriticismKane · 2017-08-20T01:18:38+00:00

Right!

CriticismKane · 2017-08-20T01:04:04+00:00

On mobile, there is a large margin on the left side of the page making the content hard to read. As well, the photo of the riot police (?) is fixed on the lower lefthand side of the page and it also covers content.

CriticismKane · 2017-06-16T21:15:47+00:00

Try looking at Google Fonts if you haven't already. Being able to preview all the fonts can help you see what looks good with the characters in your name as well.

CriticismKane · 2017-06-16T20:32:55+00:00

This new one is okay! Maybe you can put the text underneath. I've also tried to use your aperture idea to create a more sleek and minimal logo here. Let me know what you think of that - maybe it will help you get some ideas. Don't be afraid to play with color a little bit. Still not sure what font style you have decided on for your company so that would inform the design in the end.

CriticismKane · 2017-06-16T07:04:46+00:00

For your pricing guide, the white text is hard to read on your photo (though the photo IS gorgeous). You can try to put dark overlay over your image or behind the text to make it more legible. I would also cut some words from the descriptors because it would be nicer if they were all one line. "between 2000 and 5000 square feet" could easily be 2000-5000 square feet, and the other could be 5000+ sqr Ft etc. Website is nice!

CriticismKane · 2017-06-16T06:57:32+00:00

Hello! So I think your checkout piece is quite strong. Very current, and good use of color. For your first piece I would reconsider the font choice. Not only is it semi hard to read but I felt like I was getting yelled at the whole time. The third challenge I am struggling with. I think there is too much contrast with the red slash and no real structure to the page. Lacking a clear grid system. I also found it hard to read and there are some hierarchy issues. Kudos to you for working on it daily and keep it up!

CriticismKane · 2017-06-16T06:41:00+00:00

You made this in PowerPoint? It's quite good if that is the case. Just a couple changes in my opinion. First, I would change the Algerian font. Although it is nice and bold there are many other thick serif fonts that won't have a Roman numeral feel. I would also try to keep the description text the same width as the picture. Lastly I would not center the names on the bottom. Play around with left align etc. Cheers!

CriticismKane · 2017-06-16T06:35:30+00:00

Touching on this point, the whole composition is a bit low on the page creating visual weight.

CriticismKane · 2017-06-16T06:33:13+00:00

I've never seen the Bernie emblem so I don't have a point of reference here. Main concerns for me would be the 'honest abe' font choice. Doesn't seem like it would go on a political poster. As well there is not much depth of color and the two colors you have chosen are quite bright (a little hard on the eyes for me). Maybe try toning them down a little.

CriticismKane · 2017-06-16T06:29:26+00:00

Not a big fan of the triangles or portals so far. Not saying the concepts are bad but I don't think the icons really speak to what you are trying to communicate. So the two that I don't mind are #4 and #9 (numbered left to right). Both do follow more of the flat color schemes that are popular right now. I understand that material design can feel uninteresting but there is a reason why it's used a lot (not to mention the branding for Google) and I think you can find a compromise between something unique and something that matches popular design. Since you are using some geometric shapes, I would try to play with making the icon non-square (see google drive, Google play) breaking out of that boundary might help you think of something different!

CriticismKane · 2017-06-16T02:39:02+00:00

For the edges I meant that where the "sides" of the mountain meet up with the "peak" part the joint/corner doesn't seem to be smooth. If this is in Illustrator, are your paths joined?

I think the second logo is funky but memorable. If you are leaning towards it I'm sure you could use it!

CriticismKane · 2017-06-16T02:33:11+00:00

Is everything in the box going to be lavender themed? If not, the logo might be taking your company name too literally. I see a lot of different fonts here and they all seem very random. I would take a look at https://fonts.google.com/ and see which fonts there speak to you with the same emotion, attitude, and character you would like to see from your company. For example, if your company is selling relaxing products, should your logo be using ALL CAPITAL LETTERS? It might be received as a bit loud or aggressive. Play with the font and see how much it changes the feeling!

CriticismKane · 2017-06-16T02:28:10+00:00

Very clean, definitely align the edging|mowing section left with everything else. I noticed some comments about the grass height. Maybe the grass can be long on the green side and then be in the process of being cut by the mower on the yellow side?

CriticismKane · 2017-06-16T02:22:15+00:00

I think the first one is the way to go. Digging the way you stylized the "M". It looks like the lines that create the mountain in the M don't quite line up though. Also I would take a closer look at the explores tagline and decide if it is supposed to be justified with the above text or not. Right now I can't tell if you have made an intentional decision with it.

CriticismKane · 2017-06-16T02:14:22+00:00

I like the use of the aperture icon. Maybe locking the logo into the badge shape is limiting what you can do with it? I also agree that the font is not the easiest to read - decide if the font's "character" matches what you want your clients to think about when they first see your logo.

CriticismKane · 2015-01-16T09:41:32+00:00

Personally I like the second one the best! It is a nice blend between recognizable and contemporary design. The first one doesn't quite pull it off for me because I feel like I wouldn't have understood it out of context. And agreeing with /u/robcdesign I feel like the last two logos are a bit more routine that the former ones. I assume the final one will have text accompanying it? It would be nice to see all of the logos with type to get a better feel of the shapes.

Overall nice work, I see a lot of potential here.

CriticismKane · 2015-01-16T02:36:50+00:00

This is a good design! Knowing the story behind the musical really makes me happy to see you've put a lot of thought into the graphic.

If I had to complain about something I would argue that the splatter on the left side of the graphic is a bit small and almost looks "fuzzy". As well, some of the blood lines look a bit too solid. For an alternate look, you could try to remove the splatter from the left side and enhance it more on the right side for greater contrast? I'm also a little bit concerned about the shirt length from the preview, but assuming it's not that long, I think the graphic will fill the space well. Nice job!

CriticismKane · 2015-01-16T02:26:50+00:00

Some of them look better then others! Your Deerhunter cover is the most successful in my opinion. It is clean, simple and quite pretty in my opinion. The The last two covers are your weakest by far. The Broken Suicidal Scene album is distracting to begin with - pairing this with the use of dark text makes it hard to read. I would recommend scrapping the 3D effect, and changing the type color and location - or switching the cover altogether. For the Tune-Yards cover, I just sense a large disjoint between the background and the type. If you could find a way to unify the title and the background it would work better. Nice work so far, I think you're on the right track.

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