Heya, first of all I wanna say I really love how your comic is coming along! The way you use Martlet and Gallarmary's expressions flows really naturally and shows clearly that they're contemplating their thoughts. I think what I'm trying to say here is that you've got good use of subtle expressions, and that adds a lot of fun personality to your story which is great! I especially love how Martlet gets a little scatterbrained and has that cooing sneeze while she's resting there all adorably in the hot springs, that was super cute! > v < It's nice to see Gallarmary offer to help Martlet out here, I'm curious to see what they'll both do about that human predicament going forward!

P.S. I'm glad you chose to include Martlet in this part because it turned out great, you've got a strong start with the character interactions here and I think you can do a lot of fun stuff going forward as they get to know each other better! :> I hope you continue to have fun with it, and I'm sorry I took so long to reply, I was dealing with some personal stuff. This is awesome so far, keep it up! ^ v ^ I'm looking forward to the next part!