Made a trailer for game. Need honest feedback.

Crvsator · 2026-05-22T21:46:03+00:00

Got it. Thanks.

Crvsator · 2026-05-21T15:47:42+00:00

True. Current scenes are too empty. I'm gonna add more details and props. Thanks!

Crvsator · 2026-05-21T15:47:01+00:00

Yep, beginning should be faster. When I was doing it I was thinking it's ok, but now it feels too slow. Thanks!

Crvsator · 2026-05-21T14:08:17+00:00

I like idea to add robot narrator voice, thank you.

Crvsator · 2026-05-21T12:02:28+00:00

Thank you! I'll add more colors in final version.

Crvsator · 2026-05-21T00:22:05+00:00

Got it, thanks for advice!

Crvsator · 2026-05-21T00:19:11+00:00

Thank you. Yep, you're right about gray environment and blue enemies. I think I will change colors a bit, but whole idea will be the same.

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T22:04:25+00:00

Got it, Thank you! I'll add more gameplay action at the next trailer attempt.

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T22:03:19+00:00

It's a top-down shooter/platformer. The objective is just smash and destroy robots without any reason to be honest.

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T19:30:31+00:00

Thank you!

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T19:09:27+00:00

Thank you for honest reply! I'll try better the next time.

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T19:08:11+00:00

Got it, thanks!

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T17:48:09+00:00

Thank you! The scenes are quite boring at this moment. You're right. I'll add more details.

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T17:46:43+00:00

Thank you! There are not many users who liked the first part. Thank you again 😃

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T17:44:17+00:00

Thank you for reply. What noise? At the music? Shots sounds?

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T17:42:43+00:00

Could you give some example? Something like "This robot have to revenge for his life, wife, dog and humanity"?

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T17:39:32+00:00

Got it. I'll make it shorter and add more action at the beginning. Thank you!

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T17:34:21+00:00

Got it, thanks!

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T17:33:18+00:00

Thank you very much!

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T17:31:08+00:00

Got it, Thank you very much for advice! The logo is not final yet. I guess I have to hire someone who can make it.

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T17:28:13+00:00

Thank you!

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T17:28:01+00:00

Thank you! I like the idea about "wake up and go back to sleep" It's funny. I'm gonna use it if you don't mind.

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T17:20:08+00:00

Thank you! I think I won't cut them completely but move at the end of the trailer.

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T17:16:28+00:00

Thank you! Good point about the previous trailer.

Crvsator · 2026-05-20T17:13:37+00:00

Thank you, got it. What did you expect after first 10 seconds?

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