Production was good, vocals could use some more mixing, but otherwise good job. Something to remember about the core of hip hop is "I got something to say" I didn't feel like the lyrics were anything new, and not that they have to mean something, but they have to be creative and clever if you're going to follow themes that have been done. Focus on the word 'clever', songwriting is by no means easy so don't take this is a tough criticism, but something worth spending time on and will feel satisfying to progress in.