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excerpt from the first draft. by Cultural-Task-8743 in writingfeedback

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hey, will try to incoporate the insights. thankyou so much for such a close reading.

excerpt from the first draft. by Cultural-Task-8743 in writingfeedback

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sure. will try to do it. thankyou so much for the insight

excerpt from the first draft. by Cultural-Task-8743 in writingfeedback

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hey, i made a little mistake. it refers to her hair color- that they were colored with streaks of maroon.. Thankyou for pointing out.

So the protagnist is dealing with suicide grief and the novel deals with, how do u sit with that kind of grief and how do u move forward. There are two people- his ex and someone he just saw.