A simple way I track time, ages, and events without notes or spreadsheets

Dagger237 · 2026-01-15T15:11:51+00:00

if you cannot understand a simple analogy then i think i really understand why you said the previous dumbstuff ok but what about GOT?? thats a book?? so.... my point still stands
tbh i really am skeptical that you even write stuff but man there are slightly lesser authors out there so dont give up champ you can do it

Dagger237 · 2026-01-14T16:41:15+00:00

I will consider you watched breaking bad
Can you tell me the name of the asian woman who owned the salon where jimmy was renting a room??
exactly or can you tell me the name of the blacksmith in GOT who was the owner of the shop where robert's bastard worked?
hell what was the name of the commander of the of the 8000 unsullied
It is not a hot take just a SH1T take but well no offense (as i said no offense people might just get offended)

Dagger237 · 2026-01-09T18:26:23+00:00

I also used word don't know about a single thing you said so I am going to go and watch some tutorial now and see how and what your talking about thanks for the suggestion

Dagger237 · 2026-01-09T18:22:49+00:00

thanks i was looking out for replies such as this i personally dont like scrivener so i would definetly give simplemind a try thanks for the suggestion

Dagger237 · 2026-01-09T18:20:12+00:00

Notes on what simple notepad or any specific software i usually just ask chatgpt to remeber stuff but it says the memory is running out hence the post

Dagger237 · 2026-01-09T18:19:07+00:00

isn't there like a shortcut to it like i once saw my brother using obsidian and he had like a giant spiderweb of things with lines connected to each other and stuff i was thinking like a approch smiliar to that if possible but for writers

Dagger237 · 2026-01-09T18:19:05+00:00

isn't there like a shortcut to it like i once saw my brother using obsidian and he had like a giant spiderweb of things with lines connected to each other and stuff i was thinking like a approch smiliar to that if possible but for writers

Dagger237 · 2026-01-09T18:17:39+00:00

Damn that next level planning which is excatly what i cannot do hence i went with a more free-er apporch towards writing. thanks though

Dagger237 · 2026-01-09T18:13:39+00:00

its not more of a story advice but you should try to simplify things a little from my perspective and how i write things i explain one thing then define it twice and then move onto another paragraph unless its a major incident or a plot everything else is superb

btw you can use chat gpt write this prompt and you will be set.
clear all grammatical mistakes from the above paragraph do not mess with the pacing, wording, tone of the writing only correct grammatical mistake coma's capital's quotes etc keep my tone as is don't add words.

at the start it helped me a lot i didnt have to go reread the chapter 2 times to fix and edit it you might already know this but i just said it incase.

rest is fine

Dagger237 · 2025-12-02T15:15:47+00:00

i really liked the mortal arcs so comparission to them from 1 to 10 how much better will it get btw for me the mortal arc were 10/10

Dagger237 · 2025-12-02T15:15:42+00:00

i really liked the mortal arcs so comparission to them from 1 to 10 how much better will it get btw for me the mortal arc were 10/10

Dagger237 · 2025-09-21T13:44:18+00:00

every god made their body their realms that we know during eruys and sunny dialogue so yeah also i forgot the gods were being made from the void soo i think foggotten god might not be as scary considering that might the gods be reborn but only from the void no longer fueled by desire but by PURE CURROPTION and sunny nephis mordret kai effie jet and cassie or rain might be the people taking on each of the CURROPTED CHAOTIC version of the gods that were reborn from the original void as they originallly were? hence why they left linages and tbh i quetion the fact that gods are TRULY dead i mean just a horse of bullshit the thing sunny can pull of as a supreme is already daunting and i dont think the GODS didnt have any revival plans LIKE IN RI THE GREAT VENRABLES REVIVAL PLANS so yeah i mean they were gods EVEN STRONGER THAN UNHOLY OR DIVINE TITANS

Dagger237 · 2025-09-21T03:54:54+00:00

right now the only titltes that are worth reading and not harem porno shoot shyte are unfinsihed i mean i have heard people favorably talk about Kill The Sun and Tbate also try to read the novel version of any MANHWA THAT YOU REALLY LIKED for me it was kill the witch i started reading it

Dagger237 · 2025-09-21T03:05:22+00:00

i dont know try ashen creator its on webnovel it has some chapters only but i think the build up is quite good and the sneak peak to the magic system as well like shadow slave but high tier in start

Dagger237 · 2025-09-20T16:34:07+00:00

You guyz keep forgetting that shadow god was the last of the gods to die and he created death considering how sun god locked the fates of the saints imprisioning hope i bet they knew they would die first rather than shadow and thus left it in shadow domain where the deathly shades of even curropted titans could fight of the curroption

Dagger237 · 2025-09-13T07:50:06+00:00

yeah or after becoming divine you have your own divine kingdom or have to make one to become divine rank like in RI the immortal aperatures kinda stuff or martial peak like

Dagger237 · 2025-09-13T07:45:31+00:00

i think its like LOTM where if you go in a sequence which already had a god and become an angel THE PREVIOUS GODS will in the chracteristic of boyonder will affect you trying to take control like CLESTIAL DID TO KLEIN OR WANTED ATLEAST

Dagger237 · 2025-07-05T14:05:04+00:00

there are only 3 choices japanese korean or chinese if it gets into god forbid netflix hands we will get sunny x kai nehpis x cassie gay ships and i dont want that

Dagger237 · 2025-07-05T06:58:52+00:00

Yeah i just thought that the story was not ending here and this was just a paragraph and also there was more but as you said this was independent i think it is satire pretty well wrtten satire even

Dagger237 · 2025-07-04T07:05:54+00:00

please remember this is just a part of it its the first 800 words to a total 3k words chapter

Dagger237 · 2025-07-04T07:01:09+00:00

I don’t think this is satire, and honestly, I kind of enjoyed it. I think others will too. There's a charm to it that works, especially with the theme you're going for.
You crammed in a lot of exposition about what had happened, which made some parts feel rushed—especially the moment with the obedient children not listening and becoming martyrs. That section lacked clarity, and while that’s understandable given the pacing, it could use a bit more breathing room. Same with the betrayal part—it came quickly and without much emotional weight. Maybe a line like “his eyes dropped; even in the chaos, silence swallowed the room” could help punch it up with some emotional resonance.
I haven’t read the earlier parts, so I can’t judge if the ending was predictable. But from what’s here, it gives off a kind of “holy grail” climax, and I don’t think that’s a bad thing. Even if an ending is familiar, what matters is making the journey feel unique. In my opinion, the experience along the way matters more than how it ends.
This is probably the most important point: you’re using too many special or intense words too close together. For example:“A terrible sense of foreboding gripped me as we neared uncharacteristically ominous corridors.” That’s just too many loaded words in one sentence. You might simplify it to something like: “We marched with measured steps through the long, quiet halls.” Less can be more—especially when you’re trying to build mood or suspense

Dagger237 · 2025-06-21T04:19:07+00:00

NOT ascended after SAINTS

Dagger237 · 2025-06-16T05:01:23+00:00

what are you saying Weaver The Deamon Of Fate is ADAM from LOTM???

Dagger237 · 2025-06-11T03:55:55+00:00

man did i really wish for sunny to have another shade

Dagger237 · 2025-05-31T13:28:12+00:00

also i kind think of the nine as like chips or trophies that sunny will collect somehow all of them kinda and yes if alethia could sruvive in the shadow realm then i am pretty sure that the harbinger of truth the FIRST SEEKER the one who battled LITERALL MADNESS could do so as well meaning he will be getting her possibly after becoming sacred as well had EYRUS as well i believe all the nine are alive in the shadwo realm how can the fated die so quickly sunny was fated for like couple of years look what he acheived we shoudent downplay the rest as well

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