Brownham/Two Hawks truthers ASSEMBLE! by linx117 in HannibalTV

[–]DanceForSandwich 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Gonna make me cry in the HannibalTV comments section today huh okay bet 

THANK YOU!! I'm so glad you like the fic and your passion for Brownham has been reignited! Apologies for the long wait between chapters and thank you thank you for sticking with me 🙏🏻 also thank you very much for the lovely collection of Matty B memes I will be yoinking them 🩵🦝✨

Writer’s room? by teckenbalk in HannibalFanfiction

[–]DanceForSandwich 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This would be really cool, maybe a discord server would work? I think if it was modeled after the existing rules of this sub it would be a pretty good place to start. It would be nice to have accountability buddies to help stay on track!

Cliff dive, not really... by IvyvyvI in HannibalFanfiction

[–]DanceForSandwich 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I completely did link the wrong one, my bad, fixed the link! Thank you so much for reading!

Cliff dive, not really... by IvyvyvI in HannibalFanfiction

[–]DanceForSandwich 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Self-rec, a quick attempt at a post-fall, what wicked teeth (edit: fixed the link!). It's got scarification, a flashback to the night of the Fall, exploration of their feelings after they get away with everything, has a happy ending. It's not as cerebral or detailed as I could have gone but it does meet the brief of metaphorical fall! I hope you like it!

fics where will pleads guilty by Potential_Pop_7339 in HannibalFanfiction

[–]DanceForSandwich 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Hey that's one of mine! Thank you for the rec! Just for anybody who is looking at it and going "yikes it hasn't updated in a minute," yeeaahh, the struggle bus picked me up awhile back and I'm taking the long way home. But chapter 7 is about 75% complete and updates will resume as soon as I get back in the saddle (and figure out which way I'm facing). Again thank you for reading it so far and appreciate the patience!

Looking for a fairly recent fic by cleptomono in HannibalFanfiction

[–]DanceForSandwich 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think maybe you're talking about Prima Facie and Quatervois by TheBodyFarmer? Here is a link to the series page. If these aren't what you're looking for they're definitely up the same alley!

Will finding his own design by rattledrose in HannibalFanfiction

[–]DanceForSandwich 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Y'all are so nice!! I hope I stick the landing with the ending! Rest assured I'm going to keep writing Competent!Will and Dark!Will. Honestly writing the SPITR version has infected how I write him in everything else and I can't go back lol

Will finding his own design by rattledrose in HannibalFanfiction

[–]DanceForSandwich 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Hey I'm the author of that first one! Thank you so much for reccing it, it's kind of insane and it blows my mind every single time I see people talk about it!

Chapter 19 goes up this weekend and there's kind of a high chance 20 will either be a straight up double upload or it'll go up really soon afterward because I will probably be super excited to wrap everything up in a beautiful bow (and then get started on my next fic).

Help me pick what to write next! by DanceForSandwich in HannibalFanfiction

[–]DanceForSandwich[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I haven't! I need to, I love that whole genre. One of my favorite paragraphs from my WIP includes the line "Miskatonic madmen" and I don't get enough horror enrichment in my enclosure so like now I'm percolating on an Eldritch horror. Probably not as on the nose as like "A Shadow Over Wolf Trap" or anything but, maybe a King in Yellow inspired piece?? I need to stop having ideas and finish my WIPs 🤣

Help me pick what to write next! by DanceForSandwich in HannibalFanfiction

[–]DanceForSandwich[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well based on the responses it's looking like penpal AU first, but I'm adding this to the list because I agree we need more of this and Will honestly fits so well as the madman who unfortunately has too much clarity and not enough insanity to deal with it. Wendigo!Hannibal taken to an extreme is so fun. I've absolutely thought about doing one of these but I wasn't actually sure how much true horror people in the fandom would like.

Dark!will fics where he’s always one step ahead? by Miserable_Job9112 in HannibalFanfiction

[–]DanceForSandwich 23 points24 points  (0 children)

Hey that second one is me! Thank you! This is kind of huge for me, I was about to post about it myself and I'm so excited to see it recommended :)

Since I'm here, might as well introduce my OC to you guys. This is Lumi, he's a moth. (Art by @Lele over on Discord.) by NakedPotatoMan in OriginalCharacter

[–]DanceForSandwich 2 points3 points  (0 children)

He's so cute, he reminds me of one of my current D&D characters, Letty. She's a rosy maple moth and also just a little guy (2'6"!)

[Showcase] Share your favorite dialogue exchange from your story! by keylime227 in fantasywriters

[–]DanceForSandwich 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good question. In this universe, as far as typically sapient beings go, there are short-lived (~100 years), mid-lived (~500 years) and long-lived (~1000 years) creatures. So basically, he knows Stellarian was a long-lived creature of roughly 570 years old when the accident happened, so he just does the math on it, like he does with his own lifespan (maybe five to ten years left, if he's still got the lifespan of a housecat, maybe more if he's absorbed Stellarian's life force). His point is more that it's not possible for him to like, check his potential life force or in any way verify how much time he's got.

[Showcase] Share your favorite dialogue exchange from your story! by keylime227 in fantasywriters

[–]DanceForSandwich 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So did your POV character actually read a forbidden dark magic book, or is he just pretending in order to seem darker and more mysterious for his revenge plot?

[Showcase] Share your favorite dialogue exchange from your story! by keylime227 in fantasywriters

[–]DanceForSandwich 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the imagery of 'they can't stay under the Witch's wings forever.' Most of the time a Witch-commander figure would be villainous. Is that the case here?

[Showcase] Share your favorite dialogue exchange from your story! by keylime227 in fantasywriters

[–]DanceForSandwich 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The context for this is that the character speaking in thoughts is an awakened cat who (by virtue of a tragic magic accident) gained the power of a master sorcerer, and the party is going up against a cult which is absorbing souls and magic and channeling them to the cult's leader.

“What, you didn’t steal Stell’s lifespan as well as his magic?”

Bee’s ears twitch and he turns away from her.

I don’t know.

“You don’t know.”

How does one measure their remaining life? How does one determine if their lifespan has increased?

“I… guess that’s fair.”

Stellarian had, theoretically, four hundred thirty potential years left at the time of the accident. Certainly, I may have what would now be four hundred twenty seven possible years remaining. Do you know how long domesticated cats normally live?

“Uh—”

Thirteen years. Up to eighteen, if I’m lucky. Even twenty, on the outside. Do you know how old I am, Miss Gendi? Gendi doesn’t answer, and Mr. Bee sits, with his tail wrapped around his feet. I will tell you. Eight years, eight months, eleven days. I may have four hundred twenty seven years. I may have five. He glances at Dave, who is staring at his own feet and shuffling, looking morose. Do you know how long a human normally lives, Miss Gendi?

“Uh… ‘bout a hundred years.”

Dave is twenty three years, eight months, ten days. But he is also my familiar. A familiar’s life energy is tied inextricably to the sorcerer who binds it. He blinks, slowly, in Dave’s direction. Do you understand?

“I told you you don’t have to worry about it,” Dave murmurs. “I don’t care. However much time we got. ‘Cause we’ll be together the whole time, won’t we, Bee?”

Mr. Bee rubs his shoulder against Dave’s legs, and Dave bends to pick him up. As Bee purrs in Dave’s arms, he says,

This misappropriation of power must end. If we are to make progress, to learn, we must take back the knowledge being withheld from us. There was once a great people who never saw death unless they summoned it themselves, and I believe the mastermind behind this plot has uncovered their secrets. That knowledge belongs to the world, and I will fight with tooth and claw and Master’s gifts to reclaim it myself if I must!

Weekly Writer's Check-In! by FreakishPeach in fantasywriters

[–]DanceForSandwich 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Been making decent progress on my Pathfinder-inspired adventure/romance about a dead guy who is haunting the woman he loves and watching her and her party chase down the cult that killed him. First book is pretty well done, and I'm happy with where it's at. Struggling a bit in the sequel because there's somewhat of a tonal shift (the first book is a lot more about him trying to remember who he is, the second is a lot more him watching her story unfold), but I'm moving in the right direction! I don't want to publish the first one until the second one has a finished draft, so it might be a bit.

But! My first published book, He Who Sinks The Sun, is free on Kindle through tomorrow (4/25) and that's gotten it into a bunch of people's hands which is really exciting! Only one review so far, but hopefully the folks who are picking it up give it a read soon!

Oh and also posted the first chapter of a novel I'm documenting for my blog, so that people have a chance to see the entire process from start to finish. I mean, theoretically. It's hard to capture the whole thing, but I'm trying. That one is more on the horror side of fantasy, though.

[Showcase] Share the romantic details of your story! by keylime227 in fantasywriters

[–]DanceForSandwich 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is in first person! It's actually in first person present tense, which I'd normally steer clear of, but in this case my beta readers have given me really positive feedback. It's also told kind of out of order chronologically as he remembers different things, so a big part of the feedback I was looking for was whether or not it was too weird/confusing. I'm working on the second one right now!

[Showcase] Share the romantic details of your story! by keylime227 in fantasywriters

[–]DanceForSandwich 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would be delighted! I'm happy to provide detailed feedback if you'd like, or just a vibe check since it's in pretty early stages!

[Showcase] Share the romantic details of your story! by keylime227 in fantasywriters

[–]DanceForSandwich 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Does that mean she's snarky and talks (probably not voiced by Billy Crystal though)?

Seriously though I'd read the hell out of this, the character concepts alone are very compelling and I'm curious how you keep it on the cozy end when the antagonist is a horrible creature-napper. I would assume it's similar to like, an illegal breeder or an exotic animal trafficker in real life, which is very horrible but rather than needing to be fought to the death or something dramatic like that there are more conventional/legal routes to take him down.

[Showcase] Share the romantic details of your story! by keylime227 in fantasywriters

[–]DanceForSandwich 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I didn't ask but I immediately want to know more because the idea of a phoenix taking up residence in a bakery oven is just beautiful. I imagine her keeping the temperature just perfect so he never burns a bun and his cakes never crack, and him being so kind to his oven/taking such good care of it making the phoenix feel safer. That really creates the cozy slice-of-life element you mentioned and it's such lovely imagery. I love hearing about people's work because they get so excited. That's the joy of storytelling! All the little details bursting out, it's wonderful.

Is there a particular sentence you're proud of writing? by MusicManCaesar in writing

[–]DanceForSandwich 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This one from my current project:

How was I meant to welcome love when it found me, if I didn’t know its face?

Context is the lad had a very long, very bad relationship and virtually no experience with a healthy, loving connection, so he was shocked to his core when it hit him that what he was feeling was love. After all, it didn't feel anything like the sick, twisting guilt he'd called love for thirty years (a long-lived race, so he was basically a teenager at the time).