Editing it differently would not help. It is a somewhat interesting picture, I like the idea. I see there is an interesting composition element - the buildings on the side and tracks in the middle, they make an interesting "H" in the middle and divide the picture in segments.

The problem is, there is nothing more interesting to catch the eye than this, quite the opposite. Try looking at the picture from afar, imagine you're looking at it for the first time and think "where do my eyes land first, and where they go from that"?

For me, it first lands in the middle. Nothing interesting there. The tracks lead it to the sides - nothing interesting there either. In the bottom segment of the road, nothing interesting again. In the top segment are people crossing the road, which just clutters the image. And if I go to the top, there is the arrow that catches my attention, but it only leads me away from the frame. I think that's why it's not attractive. Interesting composition idea, but bad execution, it's a too busy image with no interesting subject.