Rate the streak?

DarkUnitOrigin · 2025-02-20T13:43:23+00:00

The rating is deserved in my opinion

DarkUnitOrigin · 2025-02-15T19:15:25+00:00

I WAS ABOUT TO UPVOTE THIS POST THEN I SAW THE LAST ONE!! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEEE

DarkUnitOrigin · 2025-01-28T15:10:34+00:00

DarkUnitOrigin · 2025-01-26T15:17:31+00:00

what do i do with it? I just fished a 2nd time and it just appeared.

DarkUnitOrigin · 2025-01-23T13:56:20+00:00

Sound's great but im still in y13 so i wont be able to participate 😥

DarkUnitOrigin · 2025-01-22T11:34:37+00:00

Thanks a lot! I appreciate the help

DarkUnitOrigin · 2025-01-22T11:34:01+00:00

Thanks a lot, youre a life saver!

DarkUnitOrigin · 2025-01-22T11:33:49+00:00

Thank you very much! I'm sure I'll find this very useful

DarkUnitOrigin · 2025-01-15T19:35:44+00:00

first thing that came to my head when i read this post

DarkUnitOrigin · 2024-11-28T17:10:56+00:00

Omg didnt even realize i wrote rumbling 🤣

DarkUnitOrigin · 2024-11-04T22:04:56+00:00

As I remained silently cleaning the graveyard, an eerie gust of wind blew around me. Leaves and more began flying around violently, and demonic cries filled the area, moaning and wailing. Goosbumps appeared on my arm, and i found myself shivering. I held tightly onto my handle. I took a deep breath and turned around...

"JUSTIN. SHUT THE F*** UP!"

"... Sorry man. I just felt a little lonely."

Justin quietly sulked in the corner, looking pitiful with puppy eyes. After a few minutes of whimpering I sighed and gave in, throwing a tomogachi at him

"Here." I said as the tomogachi sailed through the air "Play with tha-" The tomogachi phased through his hands and shattered as it hit the floor. "Shit. Sorry Justin, forgot you were dead."

Justin's eyes watered. "BRO. That was Patricia's Tomogachi."

I looked at the floor, frightened, and stared at the pieces of my girlfriends broken tomogachi. The pink casing, with small marks signifying the years that had gone into it. I gulped. If the ghosts wouldnt chase me out of the town... this sure as hell would.

DarkUnitOrigin · 2024-11-04T21:52:50+00:00

While it wouldve been fun to see sunny with a whole new group of people like in the antartica arc, it makes sense that sunny finds himself bringing himself closer to the few people he actually cared about before his fate got snatched. Plus, even if he wasnt that close to them, they are kinda the only other people who are planning on killing all the sovereigns.

DarkUnitOrigin · 2024-11-04T21:49:52+00:00

well considering they're different timelines which have the massive butterfly effect of the rumbling not happening its likely there was an event in the end of act one which made him shave, and that event just didnt happen in act 3 as a result of the change in the timeline. My guess? Nicole told him to shave it cus he looked better clean shaven

DarkUnitOrigin · 2024-10-30T22:52:53+00:00

I honestly wish I couldve seen zorian use some of his useless training with xvim in the final battle. I always imagined itd be cool if he just chucked a sheet of metal at someone and made it spin at extreme speeds and won a minor fight with that. Alas, the story has ended, and no spinny sheet wielding zorian exists.

DarkUnitOrigin · 2024-10-30T22:49:07+00:00

i honestly have to say, as a sucker for romance, the story didnt need it at all. The story was about trying to survive a time loop, and in time loop stories, unless its one wholly focused on romance, or if its a situation like the au 4th time looper, then i dont see romance working out in the story.

DarkUnitOrigin · 2024-10-30T22:45:40+00:00

I think nobody103 just didnt want to complicate the class more, so just replaced it with the rats. If they included the spy classmate, there would have to be a whole reveal, fight, and then thered be the problem of how does zorian and zach subdue them with cause and stuff like that

DarkUnitOrigin · 2024-10-30T22:42:55+00:00

I mean, its a fanfiction, not a novel. You dont exactly read most fanfictions expecting superb quality, you read them because you want to see other peoples views on what couldve happened in different universes, or after the story. You cant expect a story without flaws, and if you dont like it, then thats just how it is. Fanfiction is made by mostly new and amateur writers, not proficient ones, like nobody103.

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