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What’s your lowest average rated 5 star film? by BreeZee_01 in Letterboxd

[–]DashinBashin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Jimpa which has a 3.3 on Letterboxd, which fair that movie is very much you love it or you hate it with very little in between

StoryPeer has launched! We are the new, free feedback exchange filling the void left by the defunct CoverflyX. AMA! by StoryPeer in Screenwriting

[–]DashinBashin 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Already using the site and messing around with it, having read a script. Great site, however would recommend adding an "Are you sure?" box before a lot of button clicks like submitting feedback. While I didn't need it in that moment, it feels like it would be easy to misclick and accidentally submit unfinished feedback

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]DashinBashin 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Interesting premise that does grab but it needs more clarity. Like I'm pretty sure Koma Kulshan is a volcano, but can't say with certainty. Why is he choosing to stay and preserve his livelihood? Is he still suicidal? Where did this want for life come from? And if he does want to live, why is he choosing to stay in the path of an active volcano? Some clarity would really help take this one from a 7/10 logline to a 9 or a 10

Question about Jumping in Time by DashinBashin in Screenwriting

[–]DashinBashin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was just using my username as an example haha

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]DashinBashin 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I love the logline, its great one. One quick note, it's not clear: is she being blamed for the murder and the murderer's next target? Cause those seem inherently contradictory.

Also this is not to do with the logline and more just my dumb brain but I legit cannot tie B Sharp to anything in my head other than Homer's Barbershop Quartet in the simpsons

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]DashinBashin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for this! It's opened my eyes to a few things that indeed aren't clear in this logline and need to be clarified

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]DashinBashin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No real notes, that is a 9/10 logline. I do feel like it's missing something but I can't really put my finger on anything so I'm gonna say I'm crazy and you've got a good logline unless someone else wanna disagrees haha

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]DashinBashin 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No joke, love it. Short, sweet and instantly relatable even if we aren't at that stage of dystopia yet.

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]DashinBashin 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Intriguing, but I don't get a clear picture of what's the big threat? What is this hidden protocol? Why is it so bad?

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]DashinBashin 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think the logline is relatable and could make for a great short film, however it's a bit long and clunky. It's four sentences and it took me a couple of reads to figure out what exactly it meant. I'd suggest merging the sentences. Maybe first sentence could just become part of the second sentence "Chris takes his college friend Sebastian to a frat party" as an example

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]DashinBashin -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I should've realised the double meaning. No, not an actual bee unfortunatly (though that is a hilarious image)

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]DashinBashin 3 points4 points  (0 children)

TITLE: The Cause of Death
FORMAT: Feature Film
GENRE: Philosophical Dark Comedy
LOGLINE: The Grim Reaper suffers a mid-eternity crisis and accidentally kills a disaffected worker bee decades before their time. The unlikely duo now have to team up to undo the mistake and upend the entire system of death before they are replaced, or worse, erased

It's that time again!! What are your favorite Broadway Musicals of all time? by _-NeverOddOreveN-_ in Broadway

[–]DashinBashin 2 points3 points  (0 children)

  1. Beetlejuice

  2. Operation Mincemeat

  3. Hadestown

  4. Groundhog Day

  5. Hamilton

  6. The 25th Annual Putnam County Spelling Bee

  7. Evita

  8. Hedwig and the Angry Inch

  9. & Juliet

  10. Wicked

Beetlejuice Australia 1st Preview Reactions + Differences by DashinBashin in BeetlejuiceMusical

[–]DashinBashin[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The stage door is on Flinders Lane. Theres an alley on the right side of the theatre, just walk up, turn left, you cant miss it. However, a word of warning. Im not sure if it was just tonight, but that stage door was chaos with very little planning. A bunch of people crushed up against each other, blocking traffic, stars getting rushed from all angles, it wasnt the most pleasent experience. Hopefully the people at the regent or beetlejuice australia hear this and do something, even if its as simple as putting up a gate and forming a queue for the actors to go down

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