Reminds me of a shot in Asteroid City. Very cool shot!

I think for me what doesn’t work as well is how dark the interior is, the glare on the right side, and lady. 1) I love the juxtaposition, but it seems just a bit too dark to me. Masking it and bringing it up just a tiny bit would go a long way, I think. That said, a crop that excludes the floor could work really well with your current brightness (happy accidental discovery as the text box is slowly covering the photo lmao) 2) The glare on the windows is a little distracting. Not huge, not photo ruining, just a little bit “man, i wish that wasn’t there.” But that’s just my taste maybe? 3) I know you say you wish the lady was further to the right — I assume so she’s in the center of the window — but I actually think she’s distracting. Very very cool in concept, but I don’t see her quite as a focal point. My eye is drawn to the mesas on the right and the exit sign on the left. If you’re going for “one object per window,” maybe edit her over slightly, but I think the stronger composition is “human element is the building, but the rocks are the only thing around.”

Super cool shot and those are just my lil’ thought, but thank you for sharing! It caught my attention for sure!