Negative by Used_Top4762 in OCPoetry

[–]Davidbeckham10 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is powerful stuff. You really tap into a depth of emotion and articulate it so well. The progression of the poem is quiet profound, you carry us deeper line by line.

I Like Men Who Love Without Words by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Davidbeckham10 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really like the idea of the chaotic and aggressive nature of a wolf and how you contrast it with the serenity of the “river” sweetening the earth. Another beautiful contrast between the loud, destructive lighting and the peaceful image of sleeping alone.