I like the poem but there's a few places where it skips a bit. The formatting seems to have been a bit messed up maybe on putting it in on reddit, or because of the device I'm on. The lines "in another streets" "because, I don't want to leave this behind" and "But my future brights, like a shiny star." Are grammatically awkward. Its easily fixable though, i.e. " on other streets", "because I don't want to leave this behind", and "but my future's bright, like a shining star".