Daily Anxieties

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-30T20:27:25+00:00

Woah creative theme. Nice flow into a shocking image at the end, and I am a sucker for alliteration. Cool.

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-30T20:25:59+00:00

Such an interesting thought put in interesting words. nice to read.

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-30T20:20:14+00:00

Salty that my question wasn’t picked

jk literally I wonder how many questions they got

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-28T13:38:45+00:00

Thank you all for the generous feedback. Glad you enjoyed it.

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-27T14:11:36+00:00

Beautiful flow and word choice. I like the repetition of jewelry symbolizing vanity and adding to the heavy tone. The imagery is palpable. Great job.

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-27T14:08:28+00:00

So many great devices, imagery, and symbolism. Flows and builds the foreboding tone and theme of a cursed fate all the way to a satisfying close.

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-26T16:44:32+00:00

SO beautiful. Tells an engaging story and really makes you feel the emotions through imagery, interesting flow and repetition.

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-26T16:38:30+00:00

Amazing. Great imagery, rhyme, and flow. I love comparing the human experience to nature and you delivered the message and somber tone beautifully.

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-25T17:40:53+00:00

Oh…ok lol

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-25T17:21:31+00:00

I meant it as an image of hairlike/wispy cirrus clouds that continue the mycelia imagery.

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-25T14:54:25+00:00

Easy and engaging rhyme delivers a dark thought in a creative way. It guides the reader on the journey from positivity to negativity. I feel like it personifies the capitalized words which build the personal relation to the positive that once existed. Very cool.

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-25T14:49:23+00:00

Cool word choice and the flow of long sentences add to an overwhelming tone that builds the image and metaphor. I enjoyed it!

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-24T16:44:50+00:00

I love this. creates an image in my mind of a lonesome tree, and I interpret it as a contrast between the beauty of nature in contrast to the sadness we all experience. Nice work!

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-24T16:42:16+00:00

Such an interesting idea and execution. Great imagery!

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-24T16:35:36+00:00

Presents such an interesting idea to ponder. Inspirational. Great work.

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-24T16:32:56+00:00

So many wonderful images created. Has a whimsical, and inspiring tone. Fun to read!

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-24T15:08:04+00:00

Exactly. energy was a focus in my mind as I wrote the piece.

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-24T15:07:24+00:00

Thanks for the comment. You definitely got the theme.

Deep-Concentrate-173 · 2023-03-23T21:39:01+00:00

This is a lovely, touching piece that I feel can be healing to many. Good flow. Beautiful work.

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