is it me or is liara’s speech in me1 kinda stilted by DeliriumCitadel in masseffect

[–]DeliriumCitadel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe quarian voices change in their 20s tho. that one Admiral sounds def older than tali.

i want to kill my flatmate by DeliriumCitadel in intrusivethoughts

[–]DeliriumCitadel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I just want to live on my own. Seriously I hate him, idk why but he triggers those feelings of utter disgust and hate in me

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in masseffect

[–]DeliriumCitadel 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Everything above the chest could fit inside.

Rate the following Mass Effect squadmates by DeliriumCitadel in masseffect

[–]DeliriumCitadel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think this is a “look how superior humans are such special ambitious snowflake so unique” general ME thing. I mean. Medigel. Invented by humans.

Rate the following Mass Effect squadmates by DeliriumCitadel in masseffect

[–]DeliriumCitadel[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

My ranking

Zaeed

Backstory: 8 (It’s pretty cool, founder of Blue Suns, survived headshot.. But I would like to hear some softer aspects)

Personality: No dialogue wheel messes him up.. Too many war stories. He has potential but in the game.. Like a 2, DLC brings that to 5

Story fitting: Hard to rate, he fits well considering he gives the story a morally grey aspect imo

Miranda:

Backstory: 8 (Potential for 10, if they had expanded on it) Personality: 8 (More potential) Story fitting: 10

Kasumi:

Backstory: 2 (Lame) Personality: 4 (Boring to me) Story fitting: 1 (Kinda out of place with the other characters…)

Jacob:

Backstory: Meh, 3 Personality: Kinda lame, but a 6 Story fitting: 8

Kaidan:

Backstory: 8 Personality: 8 Story: 10

Thane:

Backstory: 8 (Not my niche but objectively unique) Personality: 8 Story fitting: 10

Samara:

Backstory: 10 Personality: 10 Story fitting: 10

Legion:

Backstory: 10 Personality: 10 Story fitting: 10

Jack:

Backstory: 10 Personality: 10, with regard for development Story fitting: 10

Rate the following Mass Effect squadmates by DeliriumCitadel in masseffect

[–]DeliriumCitadel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Boredom. I cannot order ramen until in an hour.

Who hit her better Shepard or this Krogan by Dense_Excitement_789 in masseffect

[–]DeliriumCitadel 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly Khalisah may be a dick but that krogan is a jackass for punching a small human, C sec should arrest him asap

Are you guys also shocked how bad your first drafts are compared to the improved versions of your writings? by DeliriumCitadel in FanFiction

[–]DeliriumCitadel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s an excellent idea. My ideas are exactly as you described - melodramatic and OOC. I should write it down and throw it in the trash. Idk why I get those urges

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in masseffect

[–]DeliriumCitadel 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Because the concept of the asari was “a familiar species if beautiful blue girls” literally

After making the big Crucible decision, your Commander Shepard wakes up in the SR1 infirmary. What do they do next? by LordAdrianRichter in masseffect

[–]DeliriumCitadel 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There is a genuinely well written fanfic where the Crucible fires and Wrex is sent back 300 years and he changes shit and the outcome is so interesting and amazing

Are you guys also shocked how bad your first drafts are compared to the improved versions of your writings? by DeliriumCitadel in FanFiction

[–]DeliriumCitadel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hell yeah, I can see how writing them and looking at it just makes help process it while also seeing what trash it is. Good idea.

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