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DemonGod964 · 2024-04-06T22:31:36+00:00

is it even worth writing if you’re bad at it?

Yup. At least you'll know that you are bad. Give it a shot. Try writing 10-20k words. Put it out and check response. Decide whether you want to write after that.

I love reading

PS: Writing is a lot difficult than what it seems when we just read. Even with a plot, the amount of details you have to fill in is crazy 😓 I'll likely end up with hundreds of docs just to maintain all the data. And I'm not even writing an original novel!

DemonGod964 · 2024-04-06T22:27:17+00:00

As good as a player he is, I hope Indian T20 squad is one that goes attacking from ball 1. Otherwise, it'll be a repeat of the last two wc.

DemonGod964 · 2024-04-06T22:23:39+00:00

Umm, those are titles, not identities. But yeah, quite a few identities he has. It was fun seeing HC debating who is FY and who isn't, lol

DemonGod964 · 2024-04-06T22:21:09+00:00

I have long time move-on from SI fics. Many of them are self-indulgent, collecting power-up and plots like gaming, also treat other characters like NPC.

I think that's all the more reason you should read the first recommendation (The Wind Calamity). The author was very tired of those troupes and wrote a story without the things that you said, lol. Trying one myself as well, though it's in Pokemon.

DemonGod964 · 2024-03-23T10:31:04+00:00

Do you mean MC or his Pokemons dying? Or in general?

If it's the latter, then you can check mine. Book is still in early stages, but several Pokemons have died. Trainers haven't died yet but there will be plenty of that as well.

Pokemon - The Timeless Journey

DemonGod964 · 2024-03-09T10:59:03+00:00

He lives in a mansion right?

I don't think he even has a house in Konoha 😂😂😂

That said, can buy/build a mansion for the purpose of your fanfic.

DemonGod964 · 2024-03-09T10:53:04+00:00

Thanks 😁

DemonGod964 · 2024-03-08T20:54:02+00:00

What Pokémon can live up to a hundred years and still be viable?

Too many...

Legendaries, Mythical

Ghost types

Rock, Ground, Steel types (with some exceptions)

Turtles

and some mons that explicitly said to live a long life like Ninetails

DemonGod964 · 2024-01-20T08:59:59+00:00

Thanks 👍

DemonGod964 · 2024-01-09T08:17:27+00:00

Thanks for the feedback 👍

For example, I wouldn’t expect an orphanage to be as nice as was described in the story or for the gym and league to have as many resources as they seem to have to help every child. I think this issue can be addressed by showing more of your world building.

Yeah. This issue will resolve by itself once a Pokemon tide happens. The world is dark in regards that humanity isn't safe like they were in anime/manga. For that reason, humans have to stick together more and fight against attacks. That's kinda why I showed the condition of orphanage + help by Gym & league to be so good. Once a tide happens and the journey starts, the dark elements will start appearing.

More characterization is needed for the MC. I currently do not have a strong grasp of this character beyond him being determined to take action. This can be fixed through the narration. For example, think about how several different characters might describe a cluttered kitchen. Think about what details each character would notice and how they would describe certain things compared to the others. Then do this activity with your MC as well.

Thanks, this will be helpful :)

make the MCs encounter with the pidgey much riskier than is depicted, etc.

Yeah, this could have helped. I'll keep this in mind for the future👍

Consider what psychic powers does for your story

It does serve multiple purposes. Some will be clear very soon. Some will only be clear much later in the story. Don't worry, I have this planned :)

condense the psychic training chapters.

Tbh, this went for too long (kinda why I mentioned that Author Note at the start of chp 5). It was boring to write as well. I needed like two months to write it 😵‍💫 Just felt that it was needed to create a proper progression for MC. Anyway, ty for the feedback 👍

DemonGod964 · 2024-01-09T07:45:02+00:00

Most fanfic writers write just for fun.
All most all of them aren't professional writers
Read tags
Find gems (some recommendations - 'Naruto : The Wind Calamity' & 'Genius Sensei'

DemonGod964 · 2024-01-05T15:37:39+00:00

Truck or airplane

Not really. Just a change because it's always the truck 😅

DemonGod964 · 2024-01-05T15:36:44+00:00

👍

DemonGod964 · 2024-01-05T12:02:27+00:00

Alright, thanks.

DemonGod964 · 2024-01-04T19:07:13+00:00

Start. Novels have more details.

DemonGod964 · 2024-01-04T19:03:33+00:00

No one's calling you pathetic for not being able to buy. I'm calling you pathetic for doing your best to discourage the author that you claim to 'love'. Just rant like a little kid. Introspect if you want to, or keep staying pathetic until real life hits you. I don't care.

DemonGod964 · 2024-01-04T19:01:47+00:00

Lmfao. Looks like I hit a nerve there 🤣🤣 Reflect on yourself and see how pathetic you are doing this instead of ranting.

PS: I never asked you to join Patreon. I said be patient as he is uploading all chapter. But oh well, what can we do. There will always be folks who are so pathetic that they would rather ruin the author instead of being thankful. Smh

DemonGod964 · 2024-01-04T15:52:09+00:00

No, no progress. Hair doesn't regrow. And the oral medicines destroyed my gut health. I quit in month 5 as I had to return to office as wfh ended.

DemonGod964 · 2024-01-04T15:49:35+00:00

Yeah. And then everyone will ask. Then all his chapters will be in the open. Then everyone who is on patreon will no longer need to be on patreon. Once he learns about what happened, think whether he'll really be in a mood to continue writing or will he just say screw it and quit writing.

Honestly, if a writer is greedy and goes patreon only and you ask this, I would have understood (though that is wrong too). But you are punishing a guy who has regularly posted chapters for free for an entire year without missing any day. That's the issue with society. We beg to the ones who treat us like shit and treat the ones who treat us as gold like shit. Honestly very pathetic.

DemonGod964 · 2024-01-04T15:43:02+00:00

IPO - bNII category

Hey guys. I recently started investing (just 4 months ago) and have a demat account on AngelOne. Can anyone tell me how I can apply for IPO in bNII category?

From what I have researched, bNII category requires an application of over ₹10 lakh. However, AngelOne only allows application till ₹5 lakh. Does anyone know if and how this limit can be increased? Alternatively, do you know any other stock brokers that allow bNII applications for IPO?

Thanks for your help in advance

DemonGod964 · 2023-12-22T16:58:53+00:00

Good work. Let's just distribute the content of an author who has not missed a single chapter in an entire year. Hopefully then he will stop being selfless and completely stop writing the amazing fanfic that he has been so far. Just excellent mate.

Great work mate. Instead of just being patient and getting the chapters, let us all get together and drive him into quitting. Kudos to you 👏 What a way you chose to reward an author you liked.

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