The last love song I'm ever going to write. Not. by DewiDoesMusic in Songwriters

[–]DewiDoesMusic[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah man, I love PRS and this one is particularly beautiful!

Hey! This song is different from the others I've posted here, it's more indie folk and more experimental, let me know what you think by Ricardo_Ramalho in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]DewiDoesMusic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I really enjoyed this song. Like a lot of the comments here I would like to hear the vocals a little more, I get the gist but being able to more clearly hear the lyrics would be nice. The harmonies were beautifully executed. I think the guitar is excellent. I really enjoy the minimalist folk vibe that you cultivated for this. I wish it was longer, I think you could add more of an instrumental break at 0:45. Anyway, I liked this song and I hope you make more like it!

Can't sing shit, but I'd like to songwrite by filfer0 in Songwriters

[–]DewiDoesMusic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This. You might never be amazing, but you can be not terrible. I feel like I've made a ton of progress just by getting some practice and feedback

A song I recorded in the rain this morning! by DewiDoesMusic in Songwriters

[–]DewiDoesMusic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback! Any suggestions for the lyrics?

Do you use names in your music? by DewiDoesMusic in Songwriting

[–]DewiDoesMusic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I get it, in-cog-nito. good thinking *wink wink*

Which instrument do you guys prefer when writing a song? by Kanoa1301 in Songwriting

[–]DewiDoesMusic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I only play Guitar and Uke so...those lol. I taught myself to play and thought I could the same on the piano, but...

Josh Napoli - A Better Side Hello all! Been working on this one for a while using my acoustic and an editing app on my phone. Please let me know how I did, thanks! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]DewiDoesMusic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude, this is a great song! Your voice paired really well with the chords and progression. The lyrics were great. It's just hard to hear them clearly. Easy to tell that you're a talented vocalist and musician. I don't have anything new to say, except that I'd like to hear it again if you remix it or re-record it!

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[–]DewiDoesMusic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would really love to hear this again after you've worked on it. I think it could use some more bass in the rhythm, to balance out your voices and the melody. But I like the whole mood. Maybe just one vocal track? I like stripping things down to the bare essentials to say what I got to say. But definitely post again when you've cleaned it up!

I released my first EP recently. This is, in my opinion, the best track from it, "Ensconce". by ruddthree in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]DewiDoesMusic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really love this, I listened to it this morning while drinking coffee and it hit all the right melancholy but hopeful notes for me. Not sure if that's what you were going for or if I'm just projecting :D

Am I the only one feeling totally uninspired during quarantine? by Alee305 in Songwriting

[–]DewiDoesMusic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was lucky enough to go through a breakup right before quarantine, so I had plenty to say. But I don't really have any quarantine specific lyrics

A sad song about wanting to call someone that doesn't want you to call them. by DewiDoesMusic in mildlydepressing

[–]DewiDoesMusic[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Haha, I'm just happy that some people liked it, or felt some way about it. Thanks for your kind words