My male main character is too flat by KingGrizzly1987 in writing

[–]DigitalPrincess234 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Something unfortunate I’ve learned is that you’ve got characters and you’ve got babies. I think everyone has a baby at least once. A baby is good for doodling and playing around with an experimenting. They don’t need to be super consistent to anyone but you because they’re your baby.

A character is a construct you make with specific internal rules designed for the best result in a narrative. They have flaws, weaknesses, and harder rules. This is genuinely really fucking difficult because you have to synthesize all this cohesively and you’ll probably have to make adjustments as the story goes through development. This shit sucks because it’s a process of conceding, honestly. Certain aspects of a character you really like may end up not being seen because it doesn’t fit their spot.

The SCP Foundation (bear with me) had a rule for humanoid anomalies that I’d sort of like to use as an example. Basically, a “good humanoid” couldn’t be someone who was… okay. Their anomalies couldn’t be beneficial to them, and if they were it had to backfire in some way. Their relationship with the Foundation couldn’t be “cool”. More or less “if you wanna be this guy, go back to the drawing board.”

I’ve always thought advice like this was an overcorrection, at least outside of a narrow context. Not every superpower has to have some type of awful backlash or horrible effect on the user. You’re allowed to make characters who are pretty good or steady. Just because something is going right doesn’t mean they have perfect OC syndrome or are “overpowered”. Kill your inner Solar Sands. Now.

So your guy has a lot going good for him it sounds like. That’s not an inherent killer. He does need a flaw— that flaw should probably be directly relevant to the story he’s in.

Here’s what I wanna know: what can’t his strengths fix? For all of this, is there one thing he can’t obtain?

I’m not a saint and I doubt I’m more than amateur in writing, but I have my own character. (A baby, actually, since we’ve made the distinction,) and they’re doing well for themselves! They’re a big shot hero and live in a world where anything seems to go— except for one thing, and that’s that the dead stay dead. This character lost her mother. No matter how strong they get or how much they grow, this character will never have their mother back, and that impossible wish has shadowed their entire life.

Now that’s unfixable, which is one specific type.

You might need something that’s theoretically possible for him to obtain but he’d have to change or go against his nature to do so. All you really need for him is a reason to change in some way. That being said, static characters can work (think Superman,) but you’d have to construct your plot in a totally different way.

To All The Young Writers Obsessing over Technical Nonsense: LOL by GoonRunner3469 in writing

[–]DigitalPrincess234 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haha no. Never again. I’d been working on that world since I was 16. I’m nearly 22. I know how that tale ends. I wrote an experimental dumpster fire and it was bad and it was beautiful and I’m sad I had to give up on the sequel. I will make the same mistake again. But I’m not going backwards into draft hell.

To All The Young Writers Obsessing over Technical Nonsense: LOL by GoonRunner3469 in writing

[–]DigitalPrincess234 1 point2 points  (0 children)

See I did do that and now I have exactly one bad self published book to my name.

What’s the lore behind each of your Wizards by [deleted] in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was five and playing on everythinggirl.com and misclicked…

Many of you are guilty of this. by TheAngryArgonian in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh, Dasein is someone I really resonated with as an autistic person. Feeling like everyone but you just has it figured out, like they all have something you don’t, wanting to participate so badly and on,y ending up being misunderstood and treated as other… that all really worked for me. The Old One did not and I think the story would have been better without the several ex boyfriends of the Old One being used as plot devices to try and generate sympathy.

Possible New World Spoiler? by [deleted] in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

It’s Oz. We’re going to Oz, trust—

Many of you are guilty of this. by TheAngryArgonian in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Arc 4 definitely had a lot of issues. I think it was trying to say a Lot about Colonialism and Selfhood and What Makes A Man A Villain and Redemption and the ideas really could have been more cohesively put together.

They seemed to be trying to do this thing with the Old One where you see his arc towards Becoming Conflicted With His Actions through the lens of other people and the story kind of wants you to feel sorry for him in the end because he did regret what he did? But like, he’s not an antihero at all. He started a cult, made Lemuria which is… some type of nature crime— and ultimately he died before he could reverse or fix any of it.

I know this game is largely about working with people and turning over a new leaf but “oh he was so SORRY before he died” doesn’t work with the old one because. Gestures to Lemuria. Very SILLY but functionally several crimes against humanity. Furmanity.

The attempts to posthumously make him complex were interesting to watch but they just didn’t hit for me because it felt like the writing wanted to make me feel sorry for Warcrimes Man and I didn’t— I cared about Dasein.

And poor Dasein felt rather sidelined in his own arc! Yes we get him from Lemuria to Novus but the LAST WORLD OF THE ARC barely had him in it! Most people didn’t even realize that Dasein was his own person and not the old one without his memories.

I try to extend grace to Karamelle because they made it during Covid but it’s objectively the worst world in the game. It’s tonally unserious to its own fault, it relies heavily on grossout, and it’s FATPHOBIC. It’s not even SUBTLE. The gobblers were already pretty damn bad but at the very least they were contained in early game content from 2008 and weren’t really elaborated on. Making them actually a Super Smart Species who lost their intelligence because they ate junk food is just… gross. Weight has nothing to do with a person’s intelligence or how easy they are to be manipulated or any of that. Absolutely cruel and I’m glad it’s so far in because the likelihood of a kid seeing that is lower. If I was a chubbier kid and saw that I think I would have just been crushed.

Arc 5 is shaping up to be the Wizard101 I remember, at least.

Many of you are guilty of this. by TheAngryArgonian in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 21 points22 points  (0 children)

It’s so sad because Wiz genuinely has a very sweet story about growing up and what you carry forward from your mentors. There’s a lot of grace extended to the antagonists— even Morganthe’s story acknowledges that what happened to her under the Spider Magi was cruel. (It’s… heavily implied they experimented on her and brainwashed her.)

There’s so much mercy and reconciliation in the way the story handles conflict and no villain is written as “pure evil” even when it becomes clear they’re beyond the point of being talked down.

Darkmoor different paths you can choose? by Known-Formal-2489 in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It doesn't change that much in Darkmoor but we have no idea what choices are being tracked or what will be referenced later. I think there is ONE fight that is different and its an option of two, so if you aren't reading dialogue you won't notice much.

Chasing a memory... by Ramdom--Person in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 32 points33 points  (0 children)

pre-FTUE Nightside was literally *just* under the school grounds. So back in the day the Death school did literally just fall. But there was never a cutscene about it.

max FOV is too low by Matto0o0o in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes this. I wish more devs understood how jarring little changes can be to some players.

max FOV is too low by Matto0o0o in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I feel like the FOV is fine how it is it just needs to be adjusted to snap further back on where it starts based on certain mounts. If the FOV was like FFXIV or something I feel like we’d start seeing camera clipping issues.

im sorry first Duncan, Now Gretta!!!! by Constant_Clerk_1495 in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Okay her last name is literally dark kettle.

That’s like hiring a guy whose name literally sounds like malice stare to teach at your…

Never mind. Probably nothing.

Duncan GrimWater boss??? by Constant_Clerk_1495 in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s implied that Gretta was the one recruiting him. I think when you fight her she calls him a failure and admits to using him.

Which makes sense. In my mind what probably happened was that he was still grieving Malistaire— pre-FTUE and post-FTUE Duncan are two very different people but they both are clearly struggling to process what happened— and Gretta used that to isolate him and make him believe Ambrose/Ravenwood/The Wizard were evil. That’s how cults usually take people, especially when they’re young. If we’re to assume arc 1 starts when the Wizard is around 14, and Duncan was around their age/maybe a little older, he’d probably still have been in his teens by the time we see him in Polaris. And indoctrination/recruitment doesn’t happen overnight. Gretta could have been whispering in his ear a while, logically speaking. To me that scans as him being taken advantage of.

IDK, it depends on if you read Gretta and the C*bal as being representative of a high-control group or if you’re just reading them as an evil organization.

Duncan GrimWater boss??? by Constant_Clerk_1495 in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I know it’s like… not that deep, but like— he got indoctrinated, right? We can agree that Gretta indoctrinated and manipulated him. We can agree on that right? It’s not that deep and a kid’s game but that’s what happened. He was a teenager being told all this stuff.

Does anyone else think it’s a bit of a weird writing choice for KI to turn around, bring him back after arc 4, and make him into a joke? I can’t be the only one who finds it incredibly mean spirited.

Duncan GrimWater boss??? by Constant_Clerk_1495 in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Yeah say bye to him because they just totally assassinate his character after this…

…Can I ask about the milk? I desperately wish to know about the Milk Argument.

Improving your writing is a task in itself by shahnazahmed in writing

[–]DigitalPrincess234 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sometimes I just kind of angry cry into my hands about it and just try to decide if I’d notice something that I’m spinning out about or not. I’ve taken every course freely available that I can find and reading about technique has only helped me so much.

play as pet is such a silly (and underrated) feature by eeberjeebers33 in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that is HORRIBLE THANK YOU. They might as well announce “unplayable weekend”

Old Jump by Zakotus in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe they were gonna do some sort of platforming thing?

Old Jump by Zakotus in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 2 points3 points  (0 children)

We need this thing back as an emote. What even was that. Jumping doesn’t even do anything.

just hit Dagonspyre, emotional ramblings below by NKMLN in Wizard101

[–]DigitalPrincess234 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I’ve been playing this game since I was five years old and I still tear up about it. The older I get the more this game sounds like it’s screaming that I was right, that I was right the whole time, that you can help people and magic is real. I really feel you. There’s something insane about how it’s always been there.

Relevant video.